Talk:Melinda French Gates/Archives/2014
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Notability of descriptions
The way the introduction is worded reeks of impropriety;
Melinda French Gates is the co-founder and co-chair of the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation and a former unit manager for several Microsoft products such as Publisher, Microsoft Bob, Encarta, and Expedia. In 1994, she married Bill Gates, founder, chairman, and former chief software architect of Microsoft.
I say this because it seems like her prominence stems from her marriage to Bill. Perhaps if we changed the first sentence to read something along the lines of:
Melinda French Gates, wife of Bill Gates, is the... etc.
it would not have this problem?