Talk:Marcus Calpurnius Bibulus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:07, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:07, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• After this Bibulus withdrew from public politics for the rest of his term. suggest:

  After this humiliation Bibulus withdrew from public politics for the rest of his term.

• In 49 civil war broke out between Caesar and Pompey and Bibulus fought against Caesar. suggest:

  In 49, after civil war broke out between Caesar and Pompey, Bibulus aligned himself with Pompey.

• The boni were against anyone who attempted to use these legislative assemblies to reform the state; this was a major policy of populist politician Julius Caesar. suggest:

  The boni were against anyone who attempted to use these legislative assemblies to reform the state; which was a major policy of the populist Julius Caesar.

• @Gog the Mild: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:23, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

@Iazyges: Many thanks, that was efficiently swift. Good suggestions. All implemented. Gog the Mild (talk) 09:35, 22 July 2018 (UTC)