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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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  • 2
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    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
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  • 4
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  • No DAB links checkY
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  • No missing citations checkY

Prose Suggestions[edit]

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, both of whom were politicians in later life suggest:
    Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, who both became politicians later in their lives.
  • American and British troops were landed with the permission of the Hawaiian government, and the rioters were arrested. may want to mention the source of these troops (presumably a nearby fort).