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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk09:53, 5 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Reviewed: Hal Stowe
  • Comment: More biographical information will be available once Presbyterian publishes a bio of him on their athletics site and more news stories break; head coaching record is currently incomplete (does not include record for 2002 and 2003 seasons) but I will add those when I find them.

Created by PCN02WPS (talk). Self-nominated at 04:35, 7 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - Both hooks are over 200 characters
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Everything looks good, except the hook needs work. It's a bit long. Maybe "... that Presbyterian head football coach Kevin Kelley won nine state championships as a high school coach by rarely punting and almost always attempting fourth down conversions?" (That's 174 characters vs. 209 -- a little shorter.) [As a note, the Copyvio report shows possible violation, but it is a direct quotation.] QuakerSquirrel (talk) 15:34, 1 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]