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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 1 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this soon. A quick look looks good, good work!

Infobox
  • Where is the production code referenced?
    The DVD case. I haven't added it because I don't think its necessary.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Where is running time referenced?
    Umm... the actual episode.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Guest actors: Tony should be Tony Oliver
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede
  • Link science fiction to science fiction on television
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "producer" is he a "producer" for the series
    I don't understand what you are asking here.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The episode aired in the United States on February 16, 1997 on the Fox → The episode originally aired on the Fox network on February 16, 1997
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The episode received a Nielsen rating was viewed by 16.56 million viewers → The episode earned a Nielsen rating, being watched by 16.56 million viewers in its intital broadcast
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "television critics" television is repetitive
    Umm, weren't you the one who has always told me to change this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah, it doesn't really matter which is used, so whichever should be fine. TBrandley 21:38, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add actors for the short plot summary in the lead
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link Vancouver
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "out their space for the episode.," why is there a period, then a comma, then a new word not in capitals
    Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Plot
  • Add actor for Isaac's
    It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add actor for Tony Oliver
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add actors for various others
    They're in there, if I could have found them. If not, I didn't add them.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production
  • In the intro, it says that Gordon is the producer, but here, that is not mentioned
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link The X-Files in "Writing"
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Writing" seems to be about Gordon, not Manners
    I just always add them there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Justine Miceli was chosen to play the role of Ariel; she based her character's sorrowful demeanor on the memory of her own father's death due to cancer." citation/reference needed
    All of that is sourced to the "prodbook2" citation. I bundled them near the end.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • In "Filming and music", link Vancouver
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Themes
Broadcast and reception
  • "Kaddish" was originally broadcast in the United States on the Fox network on February 16, 1997 → "Kaddish" originally aired on the Fox network on February 16, 1997
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • X from X, consider making a re-write for some. Example: "Writing for X, X"
    That's only in two, but I changed on to "of"--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References
  • Ref. 3: Fox Broadcasting Company should be linked there rather than "corporation"
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref. 12: Is missing publisher (Dennis Publishing)
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref. 12: Curly quote should be a regular quote after The X-Files on the reference
  • Ref. 14: Cinefantastique is already linked, so unlink now
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
External links
  • "The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki" is repetive say: "The X-Files, an external wiki" instead
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Great article, its fun to read. There are only a few issues to be fixed here. TBrandley 19:43, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • I believe I've corrected or explained everything. Thanks for the review.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    I'll pass the article. TBrandley 21:38, 2 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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