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B class review

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Please first address the following items. Then ping me and I will assess as B class. Djmaschek (talk) 22:05, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • A note says there are "cite journal" errors. Please investigate and fix.
  • There is an uncited list of Folard's publications. Please cite. If they are all listed under one source, you could insert this line. "Folard authored the following books.[citation]"
  • The French-language caption is not helpful to most English readers. Please translate. Here is the Google version which sounds as good as any: "Cannon that fires while marching at the head of a line, according to the Swedish method."
I cannot figure out what is the cite journal error. My only guess is that there is no "access-date" parameter when the "url" parameter is listed. Djmaschek (talk) 22:30, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Djmaschek:

I cannot for the life of me work out what the journal errors are (tried adding access dates);
Rewrote caption on illustration;
Added Source for works. Thanks Robinvp11 (talk) 08:49, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
B class. We will let the journal error slide. I edited the publication citation. Djmaschek (talk) 04:04, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Jean Charles, Chevalier de Folard, commonly referred to as the Chevalier de Folard

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John Smith, commonly referred to as Smith???Xx236 (talk) 12:25, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

French version: Jean-Charles ou Charles de Folard, dit le Chevalier de Folard. It's something different.Xx236 (talk) 12:30, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Don't mind what he's called but all the Sources I've used (French and English) refer to him as Chevalier de Folard (not just in the title), or de Folard.Robinvp11 (talk) 17:29, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I am sorry, I should have written "Smith, commonly referred as the Smith". BTW - why don't you correct the page according to your above statement?Xx236 (talk) 06:26, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Interwiki problem to be solved

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Xx236 (talk) 12:28, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Suggested edits

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In the second paragraph on the War of the Spanish Succession, I'm not sure where the source (Coynart) got his information, but as I recall from Folard's own acount of the Battle of Cassano he was only wounded in the arm (had a finger shot away), not the stomach. This needs to be checked.

In a question of phrasing further along (the first para of Military Theories), Frederick the Great did not find his work "diamonds in a dung heap" but rather parts of his work: "Il avoit enfoui des diamans au milieu du fumier..." GianniBGood (talk) 10:07, 22 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I've made some changes as suggested, thanks Robinvp11 (talk) 19:18, 18 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]