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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:07, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Lead is far too short.
    •  Done
  • Infobox info not referenced:
  • Melrose is mentioned in the lead/infobox but not in the article.
    •  Done
  • "November 26, 1904 between " comma after 1904.
    •  Done
  • "October 1, 1907 when" comma after 1907.
    •  Done
  • "locals were extended" does this mean "local trains"?
  • "The cutoff was removed in 1950." unref.
    • minus Removed
  • It needed 570 entries per day, but how many was "low number of entries"?
      • The document includes figures for specific months but does not average them, with 614 in 10/75, 487 pre-fire in 3/76, 390 in 10/77 and 270 in 10/80. I am not sure what you would suggest I do here.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "so more stations had no " with instead of had.
    •  Done
  • Station layout diagram, "Side platform" is overlinked, as is Third Avenue–149th Street, Flatbush Avenue–Brooklyn College, and Prospect Avenue.
    •  Done
  • "The 2009 artwork here is ..." The 2009 artwork at the station is...
    •  Done
  • "HABS image of th..." fragment, no period.
    •  Done
  • "1785 - 2006" should be unspaced en-dash, check others.
    •  Done
  • Be consistent with source names, linking etc e.g. compare refs 1&2 with ref 18.
    •  Done

That's it for a quick run. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:05, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Kew Gardens 613, let me know when you're good for a re-review. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:13, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I am good for a re review. Thanks so much.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Great, all good. Nice work all. Promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 08:40, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]