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Stewart's Dry Good Warehouse

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Fair enough. It just reads oddly. We've got 2-3 sentences that begin with the word "It". Is "it" referring to the company or the building? "It" becomes especially confusing when this happens in consecutive sentences. I mean, you and I both know that we're talking about the building prior to referencing the old dry goods warehouse...it just doesn't flow well, and I think could be composed better. Do you object if I try to merge the senetences of the section a bit more concisely? Ditch 01:12, 9 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I took a stab at clarification. You are welcome to make any improvements you desire. The reason I reverted the removal of the Dry Goods notation is because the NRHP building title redirects here so I think it's important it be covered adequately. I have no objection to spinning the warehouse off as its own article. That might be an even cleaner solution. I wasn't sure how much there would be on the building or the business when I began this article, but clearly both are very notable. Candleabracadabra (talk) 04:01, 9 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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