Talk:Ithan Creek/GA1
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Reviewer: Jakec (talk · contribs) 17:35, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
Nice article, only a few issues. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 17:35, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
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"The creek is in approved trout waters" is a bit confusing, I assume you mean that the creek is approved trout waters?Ref 6 has only 14 pages, yet the listed page numbers are 76, 78, and 80."According to a report by the Geological Society of Pennsylvania, the exposures 'are not numerous however in the vicinity of Ithan creek'" why not simply say "the exposures are rare in the vicinity of Ithan Creek" or even "According to a report by the Geological Society of Pennsylvania, the exposures are rare in the vicinity of Ithan Creek"?The third paragraph of the geography an geology section does not appear to be supported by any of the listed pages in ref 8.
--Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 21:21, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
Ref 9 should have page numbers- "In 1826, an official report stated the following about mills on the creek:" again, why not paraphrase in your own words?
Is there any more hydrology information?
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- Well-written
- Verifiable and no original research
- It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
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- It contains no original research:
- Broad in its coverage
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On hold.Pass