Talk:Italian cruiser Gorizia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Biblioworm (talk · contribs) 01:15, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

A few minor comments:

• The Spanish commander refused and instead steamed to Bizerte in French Tunisia... - Perhaps it should be made clear what the commander refused to do
  • A good idea
• At Italy's entrance into the Second World War on 10 June 1940... - "At" -> "Upon"
  • Done
• Torpedo bombers from HMS Eagle attacked Gorizia and the other heavy cruisers but they failed to score any hits. - Comma between "cruisers" and "but"
  • Good catch
• On the 28th, she left Messina for Taranto, though Allied aircraft continued to attack Gorizia there from 8 to 11 June, though she remained unscathed. - Change comma (between "Taranto" and "though) to semi-colon
  • Done
• Ten days later, the 3rd Division was disbanded, since the two surviving Italian heavy cruisers were out of action—Bolzano having been torpedoed and badly damaged by a British submarine in August 1942. - Change em-dash to comma
  • Fixed.

Everything else looks fine to me.

@Parsecboy: The review has been completed. Biblio (talk) Reform project. 02:28, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for your review, I think I've fixed all of the issues you identified. Parsecboy (talk) 22:22, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

@Parsecboy: Thank you for your work. Passed. Biblio (talk) Reform project. 21:43, 15 August 2016 (UTC)