Talk:Hugh Culverhouse/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:29, 1 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I am going to read this through and comment along the way. Please respond line by line. I will ~~strike~~ as I feel issues are resolved. Then I will do a checklist.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:24, 1 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Please see WP:LEAD and ensure that this LEAD is the proper length (about 3 paragraphs) and summarizes the entire article (I.E., it should mention the main point of each subsection of the current article although I may suggest reformatting).--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:11, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This article needs an infobox. See other sportspersons at WP:GA.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:14, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Some images would be nice. If worse comes to worse tangential images like Tampa Bay's stadium would be acceptable. Check flickr and make some licensing requests by flickrmail if you can not find anything on commons.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:14, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The citations look kind of rough. Can you link the periodicals and maybe add some page numbers?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:16, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
One more comment. Those links at the bottom either belong in a separate external links or general references section.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:35, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- I am quickfailing this article for need of general wikification.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:19, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]