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Redundancy?

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The article, as now written, says that Jardine's "business reputation was already well known throughout Asia". Isn't that a bit redundant, as a reputation is what you are known for (or how), so the phrase says that "what he was known for in business was already well known throughout Asia"? I think I'd say his business reputation was widespread in Asia, or that he was well-known as a good businessman, or something like that. --Piledhigheranddeeper (talk) 16:13, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, good point. Be bold! Go ahead and make the edit you consider most suitable. Best, ► Philg88 ◄ talk 21:36, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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