Talk:Health indicator

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Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 015-13, Writing for Others

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2022 and 14 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ashjan263 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Ashjan263 (talk) 13:05, 14 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Editing Plan

I am planning on making some changes to the article in the coming weeks. First, I will eliminate the “Example” section in order to minimize redundancy. I will add a few more examples of health indicators to the “List of health indicators” section, and then for each example add a sentence describing what it is so they can be better understood by the general public. I will also add more information to the “Applications” section in order to fill a content gap, and I will move the information from the “Organizations” section to this “Application” section. I will then eliminate the “Organizations” section because these organizations are part of the applications, so the information will be redundant. Lastly, I will add citations to each section, especially the “List of health indicators” section, since the article is lacking reliable sources. Ashjan263 (talk) 14:13, 14 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ashjan263: Great plan! Go for it! Please add citations to whatever you add, and feel free to delete every sentence which is not matched to a citation. Bluerasberry (talk) 17:04, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]