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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:52, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Two-sentence lead is a little light here, perhaps two more sentences.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "W[1]; it is part" ref after semi-colon.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "United States Geological Survey measured" put (USGS) after this.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "USGS aerial imagery..." fragment, no full stop.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "islands in the Delta" full name for Delta (first appearance in the main body) and link (and remove it from the See also).
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "Fern Island (California)" is in the see also but is already "linked", and red "see also" links aren't helpful in any case.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "construction of the Stockton Deepwater Shipping Channel involved constructing" construction ... constructing...
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • Link levee.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "and Roberts Island were 50" overlinked.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "the Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" both over-linked.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "The Modesto Bee" -> The is part of the name of the paper.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "$5 to $6 million" inflate.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.
  • "nearby Tule Island had " overlinked. And remove from See also.
    • Green checkmarkY Done.

That's me done for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:40, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: There we go. jp×g 10:24, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]