Talk:Handmade Heaven/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 04:07, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
Happy to review this article. Haven't heard this song or any by Marina, so I hope this will be a completely subjective review, HĐ (talk) 04:07, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
the climate change crisis
I think "climate change" should be enough
Done
- The rest is good!
- Thanks
Background and release[edit]
- I think a link to Benelux should be helpful because not all readers know what that is (like me)
- Done
Music and lyrics[edit]
- I'd consider removing Medium because it's user-generated and thus not reliable
- Done
- I'd also consider removing Musicnotes.com because the site's reliability has been increasingly questioned
Instrumentation for the track is provided by Little, who contributed with keyboards, synths, percussion, and drums. The song was mixed by Dan Greece-Marguerat at Solar Management Limited in London, and engineered by Little. Mastering of the track was handled by Dave Kutch at The Mastering Palace in New York City
Shouldn't this be included in the previous section instead?
- Done
Reception[edit]
- What is
return to form single
?
- Modified quote.
and recommended the track to readers
sounds like filler
- Removed.
- Avoid one-sentence paragraphs, like the Guardian review bit
- Done
Overall[edit]
- The article does not have serious issues and can easily pass GAN, as long as my addresses are concerned, HĐ (talk) 08:02, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you HĐ for the review. I believe I addressed all of your comments above or through my edits to the article. I removed Medium as a source per your recommendation but I kept the Musicnotes source because I was able to verify that the sheet music I referenced is, in fact, the legitimate official source. However, I purchased the physical sheet music as well and could manually cite that instead if you'd prefer. Thanks for the review and let me know if there is anything else I can do. Carbrera (talk) 16:08, 11 December 2020 (UTC).