Talk:Gisa (bishop of Wells)/GA1
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 20:54, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
Happy to offer a review. Josh Milburn (talk) 20:54, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
- I think readers would appreciate a caption to the image; what are we looking at, here?
- Is "chaplain" worth a wikilink? "Anglo-Saxon"? "canons"? I certainly know what they are, but perhaps others wouldn't.
- Was Edward the Confessor the last Anglo-Saxon king? You call Harold Godwinson a king further down the article
- Does your link to St Trond go where you expect it to?
- "who successive" Should that be whom?
- "addressed to Abbot Æthelnoth of Glastonbury, the sheriff of Somerset, and the thegns of Somerset" Some links would be helpful, I think
- "Giso asserted his authority over the abbots of Muchelney and Athelney, but failed to do the same to Thurstan, Abbot of Glastonbury" Is to the right word here?
- Is there a particular reason you don't cite the Keynes piece? Have you been able to access it? I think the citation could be a little fuller.
- Category:People from Lorraine (duchy)? Maybe also a more specific one.
Hope this is helpful. Please check my edits. Josh Milburn (talk) 21:20, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
- Monday and Tuesday are hubby's off work days, so will get to this probably Wednesday. (It is possible I might get to it before but...) Ealdgyth - Talk 13:28, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
- And it turns out he had a much smaller list to do than I was expecting... Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
- No further comments; happy to promote. Josh Milburn (talk) 21:31, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- Actually, sorry, one last thing: Shouldn't the title be "Gisa (Bishop of Wells)"? Josh Milburn (talk) 21:33, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- It was. But we have people who insist that we do not capitalize the B in bishop. I gave up arguing about it a while back... not worth the stress. Some MOS thing or something... and we all know how well you do trying to say MOS is just a guideline... Ealdgyth - Talk 22:46, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
- See this diff Ealdgyth - Talk 22:48, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
- Bizarre. Oh well... I'm happy enough to promote. Josh Milburn (talk) 00:19, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- Actually, sorry, one last thing: Shouldn't the title be "Gisa (Bishop of Wells)"? Josh Milburn (talk) 21:33, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- No further comments; happy to promote. Josh Milburn (talk) 21:31, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- And it turns out he had a much smaller list to do than I was expecting... Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
- Monday and Tuesday are hubby's off work days, so will get to this probably Wednesday. (It is possible I might get to it before but...) Ealdgyth - Talk 13:28, 1 May 2017 (UTC)