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Start Class. Please note, that there were 2 References sections. I changed the first one to Notes because it was a list of citations. The second paragraph under Army Service, including the bullet points, is not cited (B1=no). There may be a lack of information about this individual. However, if this person was the ONLY member of the Italian military that was exempted from the secret Italian-Greek treaty, there should be an explanation. But none was given. It also seems as though there should be more information about his record as police prefect (B2=no). B1 can be repaired easily, but B2 would not be so easy. Djmaschek (talk) 02:45, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Djmaschek: I added the citation and expanded on the fact that he was the only Italian to receive a conviction in Greece. As for information on his post war career, that is beyond my capabilities.--Catlemur (talk) 16:24, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
It's still pretty thin, but B class. Djmaschek (talk) 03:01, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]