Talk:Frenchy Bordagaray/GA1
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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 01:36, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
- Comments
- No DAB links but a dead link [1]
- Template:Baseball year discourages linking years in text
- Not sure we need to link American
- Bordagaray was the middle of seven children. Not sure there is a middle of seven?
- He publicly held out during the offseason, which became an annual tradition for Bordagaray. unsure of what "held out" means, sounds idiomatic
- Ref 5 needs an ndash
- Unsure of why 1932 and 1933 seasons are skipped.
- First two paragraphs in Major League Baseball could be combined to avoid a stubby paragraph
- Link bit role in the lead
- With the Cardinals, Bordagaray served as a utility man, backing up Don Gutteridge at third base and outfielders Joe Medwick, Terry Moore, Don Padgett and Martin. reference needed.
- In 1938, Bordagaray was used mostly as a bench player, as Enos Slaughter joined the team and Gutteridge and Moore both improved. Ref?
- He struggled with the Reds in 1939, batting .197 with a .252 OBP and .254 SLG in 63 games reference doesn't say he "struggled"
- player-manager ndash
- Death isn't mentioned? What about where he is intered?
I'll put the article on hold and re-look later. Albacore (talk) 14:59, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
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