Talk:Episode 7 (Twin Peaks)/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 03:56, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
I'll get these.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:56, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- I just gave the article a copyedit, hopefully my edits improved the prose. It maybe be a good idea to double-check that I didn't change the meaning anywhere. Mark Arsten (talk) 20:22, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, Mark Artsen's work really helped... Issues:
- Same as the last, I feel that the intro should go Plot, Production, Ratings; rather than Production, Plot, Ratings
- I would add (FBI)
- Put grades in quotation marks
- Is "Bibliography" the right heading if you include a featurette?
That's all. Excellent work. I love the prose.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:11, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
- Got them all. Thanks again for the review. And seriously, check out this series. So many TXF alumni; plus come on. Mulder in a dress. GRAPPLE X 00:22, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- I've seen the first three or four, I just haven't had the time to marathon them like I feel I should. As for the article, I will pass it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:25, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- It's best to fire them in quickly as they run together very seamlessly, it's like watching a day-long movie. GRAPPLE X 18:30, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- I've seen the first three or four, I just haven't had the time to marathon them like I feel I should. As for the article, I will pass it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:25, 16 September 2012 (UTC)