Talk:Deep in Love/GA2
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 07:45, 6 June 2019 (UTC)
I'll get to this before Sunday if you have responded to my comments on the talk page before then. Those are the major issues that I can't really start reviewing the article without them being addressed; there are other issues too that I will point out. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:45, 6 June 2019 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead[edit]
- 2011 should be listed as the recorded year in the infobox as the background and release section clearly sources it as such "composed the song in 2011"
- "It was later released as a CD single in Italy on 31 October 2011 by Step and Go, while also made available" → "It was released as a CD single in Italy on 31 October 2011 through Step and Go, while later made available"
- Change target of Radio ZU to Intact Media Group
Background and release[edit]
- "Italy on 31 October 2011 by Step and Go" → "Italy on 31 October 2011 via Step and Go"
Music video and promotion[edit]
- Good, apart from the same target issue with Radio ZU as the lead
Commercial performance[edit]
- "The aforementioned broadcast monitoring service also conducted a year-end chart for 2012, where the track was ranked at number 29." → "Media Forest conducted a year-end radio airplay chart for 2012, where the track ranked at number 29."
Credits and personnel[edit]
- Good
Track listings[edit]
- Good
Charts[edit]
- Good
Certifications[edit]
- Good
Release history[edit]
- Good
References[edit]
- Refs 7, 8 and 9 should have Amazon (company) as the target
- Set Federazione Industria Musicale Italiana as the target for ref 17
- Ref 21 should target Polish Society of the Phonographic Industry
Final comments and verdict[edit]
- Looks much better this time around, just a few minor issues that need fixing and I'll pass this as a GA. --Kyle Peake (talk) 15:55, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Everything has been addressed. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:03, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Love it! I'll gladly ✓ Pass this. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:04, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Hi and thank you very much for passing! Is there any possibility you can also get to "On a Sunday", the last one I'm demanding. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:05, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- Cartoon network freak Will do, do you think you could review "Low Lights" for me actually? --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:23, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Hi and thank you very much for passing! Is there any possibility you can also get to "On a Sunday", the last one I'm demanding. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:05, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Love it! I'll gladly ✓ Pass this. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:04, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Everything has been addressed. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:03, 7 June 2019 (UTC)