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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 14:19, 12 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. --Vacant0 (talk) 14:19, 12 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Rad! I'll get to it once all points are listed. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 15:42, 14 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
There are still things that I haven't gone through yet, I'll try to finish them tomorrow. Vacant0 (talk) 21:32, 14 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Krisgabwoosh: I'm putting this on hold until these issues get fixed. I've gave it a good read, good job. Vacant0 (talk) 13:20, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I'll get to it right away. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:26, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Promoted. Vacant0 (talk) 13:14, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Tubular! Thanks for the review. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 14:20, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No problem! Vacant0 (talk) 14:46, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

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General

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  • Infobox: consider adding a caption → eg. Official portrait, 2004
  • Implement {{ubl}} templates instead of <br /> (break) templates → eg. {{ubl|[[Civic Community]]|(2018–present)}}
 Done ... for most things. Adding it for Civic Community seems to break the treelist. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:50, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Journalistic career: "the group secured a small space on the fifth floor of the La Paz House of Culture from which to start their film archive" → "the group secured a small amount of space on the fifth floor of the La Paz House of Culture in order to start their film archive"
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The first addition to the collection was a short film directed by Jorge Ruiz Laredo about the violinist Jaime Laredo donated by the pianist Raúl Barragán" → "The first addition to the collection was a short film directed by Jorge Ruiz Laredo about the violinist Jaime Laredo, which was donated by the pianist Raúl Barragán"
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add "journalism" besides opinion and link it to opinion journalism in the "The pair's presentational style evolved from simple news coverage to commentary and analysis and, finally, opinion" sentence.
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Past tense, Mesa states → Mesa stated
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Vice presidency (2002–2003): "In addition to Cajías, it was composed of a "petite cabinet" made up José Galindo, Jorge Cortés, and Alfonso Ferrufino" → "In addition to Cajías, it was composed of a "petite cabinet", consisting of José Galindo, Jorge Cortés, and Alfonso Ferrufino."
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the next sentence: "...which Mesa credits as being..." → "...which Mesa credited to be"
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Presidency (2003–2005): I've noticed that Bs (Boliviano) appears throughout the article, although in the Journalistic career section, I've also seen b$, is b$ a typo or a different currency?
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 20:07, 16 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Return to politics (2018–present): typo, "In the elections of 18 October, these factors contributed to the victory of the MAS and its candidate Luis Arce in the first round..", two dots appear at the end of the sentence
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ideology and personality: "Texas A&M political analyst Diego von Vacano states that", states→stated
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The 100 Latinos Most Committed to Climate Action" should not be directly linked to a third-party website.
 Fixed Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done Doing so pushes the infobox deep into the text, making the area look cluttered and messy. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 18:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 20:06, 16 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Images

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  • Add alt titles to images.
 Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 19:01, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Images are properly licensed.

Sources

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  • Distinctions: awards seem to be unsourced.
 Fixed Krisgabwoosh (talk) 19:11, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Filmography: is unsourced too.
 Fixed Krisgabwoosh (talk) 19:11, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've noticed a couple of dead URLs although all of the sources have been archived, good job.
 Fixed Krisgabwoosh (talk) 19:11, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've checked a couple of sources (Ref 2, 5, 11, 25, 46, 59, 77, 110, 130, 141, 170, 197, 219, 228) and they verify the content that's on the page.
  • Copyvio unlikely
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