Talk:British Virgin Islands at the 1984 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:48, 2 August 2018 (UTC)

Will review the article. MWright96 (talk) 06:48, 2 August 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Background

• "The 1984 Sarajevo Olympics were the first Olympics, " - Games
• "While their participation at Summer Olympics has been steady" - at the Summer Olympics
• " speed skater Erroll Fraser. Frasier was the flag bearer" - try not to start the sentence like this

Speed skating

• "which was a little over 5 seconds behind gold medal time." - behind the gold medal time.
• "which put him in 42nd position, which was next to last." try which put him next to last in 42nd position.

Going to put the review on hold until the above points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 08:33, 2 August 2018 (UTC)

• Everything taken care of, thanks for another review! Courcelles (talk) 08:43, 2 August 2018 (UTC)
  • @Courcelles: Nice. Now I can promote this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:00, 2 August 2018 (UTC)