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Overall, this page is pretty good. There could be some improvements. The most important is to include more inline citations. A few sources from the internet wouldn't hurt since most interested readers will go to the referred websites for more information. More diagrams and pictures are needed- look at Battle of the Hydaspes River for an example- whats needed is pictures of the battlefield, especially if they aid understanding of the battle, as well as diagrams showing the tactics and movement of forces. A map of the battle location is also needed. Internal Wikipedia links also need to be added. Paragraphs could use a bit of cleanup to improve readability- there are a few sentences that are out of place and will need to be rearranged. This article has potential and with a few improvements, will easily get a B-class, and a few more, and GA class is also possible. Good luck. Sniperz11talk|edits 06:45, 26 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Ensured that the article is within project scope, tagged for task forces, and assessed for class. --Rosiestep (talk) 01:26, 29 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]