Talk:Arizona State Route 92/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Starstriker7 (talk · contribs) 17:59, 4 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

i'll do this review. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 17:59, 4 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Criterion 1

In previous versions of the article, the county in which the SR is located was present in the lead. Is there any worth in re-adding it?
"which contains the Huachuca Mountains" - "Contains" sounds awkward. Can this be re-worded?
Wikilink "Palominas".
"Arizona Department of Transportation (ADOT), who is responsible for" - Substitute "who" for "which".
"originating at SR 82 in Whetstone, heading south into Sierra Vista" - Replace the comma with "and" or "before".
"turned south following its current route to Bisbee. - There is an extra space between The period and the refs.

Criterion 2

There is a cite needed tag in the History section.

Criterion 3

The article seems sufficiently broad and focused, with relation to to peer GAs.

Criterion 4

The article is written without undue weight or neutrality issues.

Criterion 5

Edit history is all quiet.

Criterion 6

Images check out. No captions are needed.

Overall comments

Good work on this; I will pass it after the few nitpicks are resolved. Also, I believe I reviewed an article on the Jinke Road Metro Station, which you submitted at GAN a while back; if you'd like to fix the comments raised and resubmit the article, I think it might pass as well. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 05:41, 7 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think I addressed all the issues mentioned. Are there any more? — P C B 05:52, 7 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nope, you are all set. Passing it now. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 07:26, 7 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]