User contributions for Wikievil666
A user with 5,633 edits. Account created on 5 August 2007.
13 August 2021
- 21:2821:28, 13 August 2021 diff hist +1 m Leah Chase →Hurricane Katrina: Although the group comprises humans, we consider "group" to be a thing, thus "that" is preferred over who.
5 August 2021
- 18:5318:53, 5 August 2021 diff hist +3 m Iron overload →Diet: "Like" means "similar to". "Such as" means "for example".
14 July 2021
- 19:1919:19, 14 July 2021 diff hist −8 m David Drake (potter) r→Pottery and work: No need for "total". If there were, you would need "a total of" before "fifty additional vessels".
- 19:1519:15, 14 July 2021 diff hist −3 m David Drake (potter) →Pottery and work: "most well" would place it alone at the top.
- 19:1219:12, 14 July 2021 diff hist −12 m David Drake (potter) A bit haughty?
2 July 2021
- 01:3501:35, 2 July 2021 diff hist +1 m Ming Tsai →Early life and education: His mother's name was not Mandarin Kitchen.
15 June 2021
- 01:3901:39, 15 June 2021 diff hist −1 m Raleigh–Durham International Airport →Accidents and incidents: Run-on sentence.
14 June 2021
- 11:4611:46, 14 June 2021 diff hist +1 m Lectin →Dietary lectin: "ubiquitous", a popular buzz-word, actually means "seen everywhere". Thus it isn't a logical description of lectins..
13 June 2021
- 20:5120:51, 13 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Stevie Ray Vaughan →First instruments: Grammar
5 June 2021
- 21:4921:49, 5 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Waylon Jennings →Illness and death: Grammar
22 May 2021
- 14:5114:51, 22 May 2021 diff hist +1 m Shrimp Comma missing
16 May 2021
- 22:3222:32, 16 May 2021 diff hist −5 m Lo mein No edit summary
- 22:1622:16, 16 May 2021 diff hist +117 m Lo mein Wonton, properly huntun in Mandarin, are dumplings usually served in soup. They may have meat, seafood, or vegetables inside.
25 April 2021
- 18:5618:56, 25 April 2021 diff hist +4 m Kosher salt →Brining / kashering meat: Then is not a proper conjunction, so "and" is needed.
19 April 2021
- 16:4616:46, 19 April 2021 diff hist +4 m Firefly squid Conjunction needed
9 April 2021
- 20:3320:33, 9 April 2021 diff hist +4 m House Made of Dawn →Background: "and" is the proper conjunction."then" follows, if necessary at all.
- 18:4618:46, 9 April 2021 diff hist +3 m Chicken and waffles →History: "like" means similar to; "such as" means for example.
8 April 2021
- 18:2418:24, 8 April 2021 diff hist +23 m Fresno chile →Uses: Compared to what?
- 18:2318:23, 8 April 2021 diff hist +3 m Fresno chile →History: obvious
- 18:2218:22, 8 April 2021 diff hist +2 m Fresno chile If you really want to use "however" mid-sentence, it must be set off with commas.
7 April 2021
- 20:4620:46, 7 April 2021 diff hist −1 m Conlon Nancarrow →Early years: unneeded
5 April 2021
- 22:3522:35, 5 April 2021 diff hist −3 m Java version history unneeded
4 April 2021
- 12:5912:59, 4 April 2021 diff hist +6 m Paul McGuire (radio host) did???
30 March 2021
- 16:2716:27, 30 March 2021 diff hist +4 Pupusa No edit summary
12 February 2021
- 21:5921:59, 12 February 2021 diff hist −12 m Georgia Pellegrini →Early years: One cannot graduate a school, like one can stir a milkshake. It is the school that does the graduating. Thus one graduates FROM a school.
2 February 2021
- 00:3100:31, 2 February 2021 diff hist −1 m Tsipouro You must be slapping your forehead. Tag: Reverted
29 August 2020
- 22:5522:55, 29 August 2020 diff hist 0 m Marksmanship Medal Plural
28 August 2020
- 17:2117:21, 28 August 2020 diff hist +4 m Owney Madden →Early life: "Then" is not a conjunction, so "and" is needed.
27 August 2020
- 22:5122:51, 27 August 2020 diff hist +3 Radish "Like
23 June 2020
- 22:3222:32, 23 June 2020 diff hist +3 m Scoville scale →Capsaicinoids: Like means similar to; such as means an example.
- 18:5118:51, 23 June 2020 diff hist −4 m Euphorbia →Irritants: No need to "and" this.
21 June 2020
- 19:5119:51, 21 June 2020 diff hist −6 John Grisham /* Early life worke as a worker
20 June 2020
- 14:0814:08, 20 June 2020 diff hist −83 Movable type All use of movable type was for printing. Don't be ridiculous.
- 14:0314:03, 20 June 2020 diff hist +4 Movable type No edit summary
17 June 2020
- 19:2719:27, 17 June 2020 diff hist −2 m American Pie (song) "while" is only about time.
16 June 2020
- 20:0020:00, 16 June 2020 diff hist +2 m Margaret Chase Smith →U.S. House of Representatives
- 02:4002:40, 16 June 2020 diff hist +1 m The Gambler (song) "However" unless your meaning is "In whatever manner" should be parenthetical (NEVER a conjunction).
- 02:3402:34, 16 June 2020 diff hist −9 m The Gambler (song) TOTALLY unneeded use of "however".
15 June 2020
- 22:5422:54, 15 June 2020 diff hist +73 m Yogurt →Straining: Read a few labels to confirm that milk powder is often added.
- 22:3122:31, 15 June 2020 diff hist −5 m Michael Pack →Career: https://www.imdb.com/name/nm1530434/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0
- 22:0122:01, 15 June 2020 diff hist −12 m List of breads →Breads: More likely it originated in New Mexico. As a child growing up in Texas, I first became aware of "Texas" toast in supermarkets.
- 01:2801:28, 15 June 2020 diff hist −1 m Glen Campbell →Death, legacy and tributes: "Which" is for choices.
14 June 2020
- 22:3822:38, 14 June 2020 diff hist −4 m Norma Jean (singer) Let's eliminate the phrase "a number of". Zero is a number.
- 22:3622:36, 14 June 2020 diff hist −3 m Porter Wagoner "throughout the late"?
- 22:1722:17, 14 June 2020 diff hist −10 m Grammy Awards →Commercialism: Unneeded word, such as "the very exact same thing".
- 21:1321:13, 14 June 2020 diff hist −10 Branston (brand) No need for a new paragraph. No need for a conjunction ("however" is not a proper conjunction anyway).
- 14:0714:07, 14 June 2020 diff hist −12 m Brunswick stew Unneeded word. Any single thing, such as a stew, has one origin.
- 11:4011:40, 14 June 2020 diff hist +5 m Yogurt You've gone out of your way to avoid two sentences, but two is perfect.
- 04:0804:08, 14 June 2020 diff hist −9 m Roger Miller →Nashville songwriter: ABSOLUTELY no need for "however" here. Also "however" is not a conjunction. Use the humble "but" if you want to join clauses..
9 June 2020
- 16:1016:10, 9 June 2020 diff hist +6 m Travels with Darley "Like" means similar to; "such as" is for examples. I give up. You cannot write.
