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Dedhar
Dedhar
clan
Ethnicity	Gurjar
Location	Punjab, Kashmir, Delhi, Gujarat, Haryana, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa, Uttar Pradesh, Balochistan, Madhya Pradesh, Himachal Pradesh, Uttarakhand
Language	Punjabi (its dialects and varieties), Kashmiri
Religion	Islam,Sikhism, Hinduism

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Submission declined on 17 November 2023 by Nagol0929 (talk).

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Submission declined on 15 November 2023 by Ca (talk).

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Declined by Ca 6 months ago.

Comment: Thank you for the submission, but More sources are needed to flesh out the draft. Also, this source doesn't look very reliable to me. Ca ^{talk to me!} 14:32, 15 November 2023 (UTC)

Dedha,^[1]^[2] (also spelled), Dedhar^[3] or Dedhar^[4]^[5]^[6] is a clan of Gurjar ethnic community of Pakistan and India. They are mainly found predominantly in the Punjab and Kashmir region of Pakistan and India. They predominantly follow Hinduism and Islam,^[3] with a minority following Sikhism.^[7]

References

^ Khari, Rahul (2007). Jats and Gujars: Origin, History and Culture. Reference Press. p. 80. ISBN 978-81-8405-031-8. Gujar clans of Karnal and Panipat: The Gujars were bound to make robberies and cattle lifting like Ranghars after mutiny as their lands were seized by Brithish Government. Gujars of this district are closely allied , and their villages are nearly always in the vicinity of each other . The following are the principal Gujar clans : - Rawal, Chhokar, Dedha (Dhinde) Chamain Kalsan Girathi.
^ Ibbetson, Sir Denzil; Maclagan (1990). Glossary of the Tribes and Castes of the Punjab and North West Frontier Province. Asian Educational Services. p. 233. ISBN 978-81-206-0505-3.
^ ^a ^b Weekes, Richard V. (1984). Muslim Peoples: Acehnese. Greenwood Press. p. 300. ISBN 978-0-313-24639-5. Almost all Muslim Gujars prays five times a day, celebrate Id al Zuha ( Id al Adha ) and Id al Fitr are their main festivals . Some still conduct their Hindu gotta system and some of their clans are Dedhar, Jinar, Bhumbla, Katarya, Poswal, Kasave, Rawal and Tomar.
^ Shaw, Alison (2000). Kinship and Continuity: Pakistani Families in Britain. Psychology Press. p. 117. ISBN 978-90-5823-076-8.
^ Rensch, Calvin Ross; O'Leary, Clare F.; Hallberg, Calinda E. (1992). Hindko and Gujari. National Institute of Pakistan Studies, Quaid-i-Azam University. p. 137. The Gujars claim to be the oldest inhabitants in the Hazara and Dedar Gujars for defense purposes settled first in the region. Then later , Khatana , Chechi , Kohli and Thekri Gujars came and settled in the same region.
^ Rensch, Calvin Ross (1992). Sociolinguistic Survey of Northern Pakistan: Hindko and Gujari. National Institute of Pakistan Studies, Quaid-i-Azam University. pp. 137 and 138.
^ "Thar Gotra ( Indian Gotra ) थर गोत्र". Hindu Cultural Center. 2019-05-08. Retrieved 2023-11-10.

[1] Khari, Rahul (2007). Jats and Gujars: Origin, History and Culture. Reference Press. p. 80. ISBN 978-81-8405-031-8. Gujar clans of Karnal and Panipat: The Gujars were bound to make robberies and cattle lifting like Ranghars after mutiny as their lands were seized by Brithish Government. Gujars of this district are closely allied , and their villages are nearly always in the vicinity of each other . The following are the principal Gujar clans : - Rawal, Chhokar, Dedha (Dhinde) Chamain Kalsan Girathi.

[2] Ibbetson, Sir Denzil; Maclagan (1990). Glossary of the Tribes and Castes of the Punjab and North West Frontier Province. Asian Educational Services. p. 233. ISBN 978-81-206-0505-3.

[:0-3] Weekes, Richard V. (1984). Muslim Peoples: Acehnese. Greenwood Press. p. 300. ISBN 978-0-313-24639-5. Almost all Muslim Gujars prays five times a day, celebrate Id al Zuha ( Id al Adha ) and Id al Fitr are their main festivals . Some still conduct their Hindu gotta system and some of their clans are Dedhar, Jinar, Bhumbla, Katarya, Poswal, Kasave, Rawal and Tomar.

[4] Shaw, Alison (2000). Kinship and Continuity: Pakistani Families in Britain. Psychology Press. p. 117. ISBN 978-90-5823-076-8.

[5] Rensch, Calvin Ross; O'Leary, Clare F.; Hallberg, Calinda E. (1992). Hindko and Gujari. National Institute of Pakistan Studies, Quaid-i-Azam University. p. 137. The Gujars claim to be the oldest inhabitants in the Hazara and Dedar Gujars for defense purposes settled first in the region. Then later , Khatana , Chechi , Kohli and Thekri Gujars came and settled in the same region.

[6] Rensch, Calvin Ross (1992). Sociolinguistic Survey of Northern Pakistan: Hindko and Gujari. National Institute of Pakistan Studies, Quaid-i-Azam University. pp. 137 and 138.

[7] "Thar Gotra ( Indian Gotra ) थर गोत्र". Hindu Cultural Center. 2019-05-08. Retrieved 2023-11-10.

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