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Submission declined on 4 November 2023 by Oltrepier (talk).

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Declined by Oltrepier 6 months ago. Last edited by Oltrepier 6 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 13 September 2023 by Greenman (talk).

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Declined by Greenman 8 months ago.

Comment: No significant progress has been made since the last review, unfortunately... Oltrepier (talk) 15:47, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

Comment: References need to verify the statements they're used for. For example, linking to a source about the history of Kosovo does nothing to either establish notability, or verify the specific statement, and is a form of WP:REFBOMB. Greenman (talk) 18:52, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

Elsa Shala is a professional basketball player^[1]^[2] in the Republic of Kosovo. She was born in Peja (26.06.2007). She is a Player of KBF PEJA 03^[3] and participate as one from very best players of league U18 (Superliga)^[4].

Important Events

The match against Pristina KB (Kupa e Kosovës) 2022/2023 U 16 LEAGUE ''Best Player Trophy"
Championship Division C^[5], Player of Kosova national team, held in Pristina-Kosova.

References

^ "Elsa SHALA at the FIBA U18 Women's European Championship 2023, Division C". FIBA.basketball. Retrieved 2023-09-04.
^ Eurobasket. "Elsa Shala, Basketball Player, News, Stats - Eurobasket". Eurobasket LLC. Retrieved 2023-09-04.
^ Pllana, Enis (2022-03-02). "KBF Peja 03, klubi që po shkëlqen në Ligën e Parë, pritet të inkuadrohet në Superligë". Sinjali (in Albanian). Retrieved 2023-09-04.
^ "Superliga Women 2022/2023 Scores - Basketball Kosovo Live". www.basketball24.com. Retrieved 2023-09-04.
^ "FIBA U18 Women's European Championship 2023, Division C". FIBA.basketball. Retrieved 2023-09-04.

[1] "Elsa SHALA at the FIBA U18 Women's European Championship 2023, Division C". FIBA.basketball. Retrieved 2023-09-04.

[2] Eurobasket. "Elsa Shala, Basketball Player, News, Stats - Eurobasket". Eurobasket LLC. Retrieved 2023-09-04.

[3] Pllana, Enis (2022-03-02). "KBF Peja 03, klubi që po shkëlqen në Ligën e Parë, pritet të inkuadrohet në Superligë". Sinjali (in Albanian). Retrieved 2023-09-04.

[4] "Superliga Women 2022/2023 Scores - Basketball Kosovo Live". www.basketball24.com. Retrieved 2023-09-04.

[5] "FIBA U18 Women's European Championship 2023, Division C". FIBA.basketball. Retrieved 2023-09-04.

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 Elsa Shala is a professional basketball player<ref>{{Cite web |title=Elsa SHALA at the FIBA U18 Women's European Championship 2023, Division C |url=https://www.fiba.basketball/europe/u18cwomen/2023/player/Elsa-Shala |access-date=2023-09-04 |website=FIBA.basketball |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Eurobasket |title=Elsa Shala, Basketball Player, News, Stats - Eurobasket |url=https://www.eurobasket.com/index.aspx |access-date=2023-09-04 |website=Eurobasket LLC}}</ref> in the Republic of Kosovo. She was born in Peja (26.06.2007). She is a Player of KBF PEJA 03<ref>{{Cite web |last=Pllana |first=Enis |date=2022-03-02 |title=KBF Peja 03, klubi që po shkëlqen në Ligën e Parë, pritet të inkuadrohet në Superligë |url=https://sinjali.com/kbf-peja-03-klubi-qe-po-shkelqen-ne-ligen-e-pare-pritet-te-inkuadrohet-ne-superlige/ |access-date=2023-09-04 |website=Sinjali |language=sq}}</ref> and participate as one from very best players of league U18 (Superliga)<ref>{{Cite web |title=Superliga Women 2022/2023 Scores - Basketball Kosovo Live |url=https://www.basketball24.com/kosovo/superliga-women/ |access-date=2023-09-04 |website=www.basketball24.com |language=en}}</ref>.