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25 September 2024

24 September 2024

  • 14:4214:42, 24 September 2024 diff hist +3‎ Berenice IV ‎ →‎Biography: Minor grammar error. Fixed syntax. Original Statement:"Ptolemy Auletes was initially unable take his kingdom back from the two queens." Improved Statement:"...Ptolemy Auletes was initially unable to take his kingdom back from the two queens." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 September 2024

21 September 2024

  • 22:3522:35, 21 September 2024 diff hist +5‎ Business intelligence software ‎ Insertion of acronym of BI as a language comprehension protocol "first appearance incidence". A protocol which assists reader's memory in subsequent appearances. Subsequence as appearance (of the acronym), must not be initial appearance (of the acronym). Original Statement: "...and report data for business intelligence." Improved Statement: "...and report data for business intelligence (BI)." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 17:3317:33, 21 September 2024 diff hist +3‎ Grant Thornton International ‎ →‎Assetco: Minor grammar error Original Statement: "...was ordered pay £21..." Improved Statement: "...was ordered to pay £21..." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 September 2024

16 September 2024

14 September 2024

  • 12:5312:53, 14 September 2024 diff hist 0‎ GSM ‎ →‎Enhancements: Fixed typo Original phrase:"1800 MHz network became operational in the UK by 1993, called and DCS 1800." Improved Phrase:"1800 MHz network became operational in the UK by 1993, called and DCS 1800." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 September 2024

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6 September 2024

19 June 2024

  • 06:4106:41, 19 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Patrice Motsepe ‎ Changed the "year" error in the photo caption statement, originally appearing as 1924: "Motsepe handing the CAF Confederation Cup trophy to Zamalek's captain Shikabala, Cairo in May 1924" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 06:3506:35, 19 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ Patrice Motsepe ‎ Firstly, corrected typographical error by insertion of a capital letter "R" to improve the proper noun status of the South African currency Rand. Secondly, added "s" to denote a plural form of Rands. Original phrase:... million rand.... Changed phrase.... million Rands. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 June 2024

  • 20:4420:44, 16 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ Brett Kebble ‎ Spelling error, corrected by inserting 'c' in a proper noun Schultz, which appeared in this paragraph:"During the Agliotti trial, Shultz testified that Kebble, through John Stratton, ordered the murder of several people, including Martin Welz, the editor of Noseweek." current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 20:3720:37, 16 June 2024 diff hist +7‎ Brett Kebble ‎ Inserted the acronym BKAA in the first paragraph, as it appeared first time in the fourth paragraph without prior bracketed appearance as per standard protocol for notation of proper phrases assigned acronyms: As it appeared in fourth paragraph - "In February 2006, artist Deborah Weber opened a solo exhibition in Johannesburg called Art Media Media Art on the same day that the BKAA were to open at the Cape Town International Convention Centre." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 20:2320:23, 16 June 2024 diff hist −4‎ Irish Rebellion of 1798 ‎ Improved sentence comprehension by removing one past participle "had", which appeared to three times to thus:"In later exile, he was to claim that he might have made an attempt on Ireland (instead of sailing in May 1798 for Egypt) had had he had confidence in Tone the other United Irish agents appearing in Paris. He describes them as divided in opinion and constantly quarrelling." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 09:3409:34, 16 June 2024 diff hist +36‎ m Shebeen ‎ Improved meaning in the phrase:"... serving commercial beers", by replacing it with:"... serving diverse commercial brands from beer, cider and whisky...". current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 09:1209:12, 16 June 2024 diff hist −2‎ m Pass law ‎ Sentence comprehension improved: by replacing "There", with "The" in the start of the sentence:"There (The) vociferous opposition to the pass laws are of no surprise, considering the “fact that black women in South Africa have traditionally taken a more active role in mass popular protest”, in comparison to men" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 May 2024

3 May 2024

  • 19:1919:19, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ Tau Zero ‎ →‎Plot: Improved intonation by removing twicely repeated adjective "enough", with the synonym "adequately". Original sentence:"They must wait, flying free but essentially without the ability to change course, until they randomly encounter enough galactic matter to decelerate enough to search for habitable planets." Improved sentence intonation thus:"They must wait, flying free but essentially without the ability to change course, until they randomly encounter enough galactic matter to decel... current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 18:0718:07, 3 May 2024 diff hist −23‎ Ethnogenesis ‎ →‎Jews: Removed the monotonous/repetitive inclusion of the phrase:" In classical antiquity", as appearing in the original sentence:"In classical antiquity, Jewish, Greek and Roman authors frequently referred to the Jewish people in classical antiquity as an ethnos, one of the numerous ethne that lived in the Greco-Roman world." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 17:1117:11, 3 May 2024 diff hist +3‎ Liu Cixin ‎ Omission of "is" as the auxiliary or linking verb rectified in the phrase: "Liu said that this "not what Chinese people care about", .... The phrase was corrected thus:"Liu said that this is "not what Chinese people care about", .... Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 April 2024

  • 08:0308:03, 4 April 2024 diff hist +4‎ Polymath ‎ Minor typographical correction, by insertion of "are" to assist in grammatical comprehension of the following sentence/statement: "These typologies are based on real creative production records first published by Root-Bernstein, Bernstein, and Garnier (1993)." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 February 2024

21 January 2024

  • 17:0017:00, 21 January 2024 diff hist +1‎ Aunt May ‎ Removing a comma supposed to be a full stop:"...Queens, She remained an..." Reducing a very long sentence, converting it into two sentences. The original erroneous typo is below: "After the death of her brother-in-law and his wife, May and her husband Ben Parker took in their only nephew, Peter, and raised him at their home at 20 Ingram Street, Forest Hills, Queens, She remained an important influence in Peter's life even during college as she was the only family he had left. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 11:5011:50, 21 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Mokrani Revolt ‎ Converted a plural noun (committees). Converted a past participle into present tense (organize). The sentence with errors is below before the conversion. "Then, Algerian protests began in public places, and in the South of Algeria, people committee were established to organized the revolt." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 January 2024

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7 December 2023

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25 October 2023

  • 15:5315:53, 25 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ Sisport ‎ Changed a tense "has" with "was" in the sentence "Since 1978, it has first known as Sisport Fiat and then simply as Sisport." By replacing it with"Since 1978, it was first known as Sisport Fiat and then simply as Sisport." Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 October 2023

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17 September 2023

  • 07:0207:02, 17 September 2023 diff hist +12‎ David Webster (anthropologist) ‎ Replaced the plural noun "sociologist", clarified the acronym "Wits" in the sentence "His brother Eddie Webster, sociologists in Southern Centre for Inequality Studies, Wits.". Availed the acronym "Wits" in brackets to the first appearance of the full noun of place, University of the Witswatersrand (Wits). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 September 2023

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