User contributions for Xeaver
A user with 29 edits. Account created on 10 July 2022.
15 July 2022
- 14:2614:26, 15 July 2022 diff hist +484 User talk:Xeaver →July 2022: Reply current Tag: Reply
14 July 2022
- 15:4415:44, 14 July 2022 diff hist +306 Packshot paragraph reconstruction and reordering of information into paragraphs Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 14:4414:44, 14 July 2022 diff hist 0 Alfred Freddy Krupa sentence reordering Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 14:4014:40, 14 July 2022 diff hist −8 Kuggen adding more clarity Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 14:1114:11, 14 July 2022 diff hist +231 Marchesa (brand) tried to remove the direct advertising style by using reporting verbs Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
13 July 2022
- 16:2116:21, 13 July 2022 diff hist +41 Clarice Cliff sentence reordering shortening, balance and clearing ambiguities Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 14:5314:53, 13 July 2022 diff hist −195 Jamie Gunns tried to remove unnecessary references Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 14:3514:35, 13 July 2022 diff hist +64 MAGI '900- Museum of Artistic and Historical Excellence edited sentence length and removed ambiguities Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
12 July 2022
- 16:3616:36, 12 July 2022 diff hist −2 John Elliot (author) much is used in the interrogative and negative whereas a lot is used in the affirmative??? Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:5915:59, 12 July 2022 diff hist −7 Gaturro: The Movie a few minor changes in sentence length and commas Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:3715:37, 12 July 2022 diff hist −62 Little Red Lighthouse Editing long run-on sentences and some vocabulary choice, hope it's OK Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:1515:15, 12 July 2022 diff hist +62 Ashland Independent Film Festival shorter sentences and less ambiguity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 12:3612:36, 12 July 2022 diff hist −59 Rock On 2 I haven't seen the movie but tried nonetheless to keep the ideas clearer. The main editing is to make things smoother. I stopped because there are some ambiguous events I couldn't guess in order to continue Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:5611:56, 12 July 2022 diff hist +59 Natural hair movement rephrasing, commas and long sentences. This is a tough one for me and I feel the articles generally are good at the beginning but seem to decline a little bit towards the end. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 10:5110:51, 12 July 2022 diff hist −4 Hansel and Gretel (2007 film) I haven't seen this movie but tried economy and remove unclear sentences or long ones Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
11 July 2022
- 15:3815:38, 11 July 2022 diff hist −16 Marina Erakovic editing for economy but I don't have enough info to add to the section 2008-2009 because some dates are missing Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:2315:23, 11 July 2022 diff hist +37 Sunspot (Marvel Comics) I don't have enough information about Sunspot so I tried to clear the ambiguity between the character and the actor especially in the section Publication history but I was stuck Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 10:4710:47, 11 July 2022 diff hist +8 Bashy not sure I removed some ambiguities but I tried Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 10:3610:36, 11 July 2022 diff hist −6 Exposé (group) rephrasing, commas and long sentences Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 10:0610:06, 11 July 2022 diff hist −30 Common Agricultural Policy comma removed added a preposition and a few minor other changes Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 09:4809:48, 11 July 2022 diff hist +36 Mangalia Marina a few minor details Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 09:2109:21, 11 July 2022 diff hist +159 User talk:Xeaver →National varieties of English: Reply Tag: Reply
10 July 2022
- 12:0512:05, 10 July 2022 diff hist +10 Queensland College of Art and Design remove redundancies and ambiguities Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:4911:49, 10 July 2022 diff hist +55 City of Liverpool College remove redundancies and ambiguities Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:3711:37, 10 July 2022 diff hist −45 Arcadia Fund remove repetitions split and reorder a paragraph Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:1111:11, 10 July 2022 diff hist −16 Radu Sîrbu a few commas removed and a run-on sentence shortened Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 11:0411:04, 10 July 2022 diff hist 0 F6 (cigarette) →History Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
