User contributions for WWDanskin
A user with 286 edits. Account created on 24 November 2014.
22 June 2023
- 16:5516:55, 22 June 2023 diff hist −21 m Hooked on Phonics Deleted irrelevant clause. current
20 June 2023
- 11:5511:55, 20 June 2023 diff hist +10 m Russell Ginns →Publishing: Italicized book titles.
- 11:5311:53, 20 June 2023 diff hist −60 m Russell Ginns →Publishing: Shortened description.
- 11:5011:50, 20 June 2023 diff hist −198 Russell Ginns →Games and interactive media: Simplified and clarified listed works.
- 11:4211:42, 20 June 2023 diff hist −695 Russell Ginns →Publishing: Deleted excessive book reference.
- 11:3011:30, 20 June 2023 diff hist −48 m James Webb Space Telescope →Naming Concerns: Eliminated self-evidential phrase. I left the citation in place.
- 11:2711:27, 20 June 2023 diff hist +9 James Webb Space Telescope →Naming
- 11:2311:23, 20 June 2023 diff hist −26 m James Webb Space Telescope →Naming: eliminated redundancy (the evidence documents are mentioned later in the sentence.
- 11:2111:21, 20 June 2023 diff hist −15 James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: This section is not merely about the controversy, and this is the first mention of the name.
- 11:1611:16, 20 June 2023 diff hist −14 m London Eye →Ownership and branding
- 11:1311:13, 20 June 2023 diff hist −465 London Eye →Ownership and branding: Modified several the sentences to eliminate redundancy. Consolidated passages that had multiple mentions of the promotional events.
21 February 2023
- 02:1102:11, 21 February 2023 diff hist +86 Russell Ginns Added reference.
- 02:0702:07, 21 February 2023 diff hist −38 Russell Ginns →Games and interactive media: Removed redundant game reference.
- 02:0502:05, 21 February 2023 diff hist −12 Russell Ginns →Games and interactive media
- 02:0202:02, 21 February 2023 diff hist +16 m Russell Ginns →Games and interactive media
- 02:0102:01, 21 February 2023 diff hist +5 m Russell Ginns No edit summary
- 02:0002:00, 21 February 2023 diff hist −27 Russell Ginns Updated photo to show more recent book festival.
- 01:4501:45, 21 February 2023 diff hist +10 m Russell Ginns No edit summary
- 01:4401:44, 21 February 2023 diff hist +53 Russell Ginns →Bibliography
- 01:4301:43, 21 February 2023 diff hist +70 Russell Ginns →Bibliography
- 01:3901:39, 21 February 2023 diff hist 0 m Interval Research Corporation Moved name to alphabetize the list.
- 01:3801:38, 21 February 2023 diff hist +46 Interval Research Corporation No edit summary
17 January 2023
- 13:5213:52, 17 January 2023 diff hist +34 m Russell Ginns →External links
- 13:4913:49, 17 January 2023 diff hist +5 Russell Ginns →Games and interactive media
- 13:4713:47, 17 January 2023 diff hist +21 m Russell Ginns →Publishing
22 November 2022
- 14:0814:08, 22 November 2022 diff hist −25 m Russell Ginns No edit summary
- 14:0614:06, 22 November 2022 diff hist +1 m Russell Ginns No edit summary
- 14:0514:05, 22 November 2022 diff hist +161 Russell Ginns No edit summary
- 14:0114:01, 22 November 2022 diff hist +50 m Russell Ginns →Bibliography: added a recent publication
5 October 2022
- 17:0217:02, 5 October 2022 diff hist −50 Russell Ginns →External links Tag: Reverted
16 August 2022
- 13:0713:07, 16 August 2022 diff hist −75 m London Eye →Ownership and branding: Simplified sentence, and removed a dead citation.
- 13:0113:01, 16 August 2022 diff hist −7,171 James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: An extended discussion of this is separate from the many facts, history and discoveries of the telescope. It should be covered in articles about the person, or about the history of NASA and the Lavender Scare. Additionally, several of the footnotes were self-referential and/or contained inflammatory language. As this section keeps expanding, perhaps it should be an entry, not a large section of an entry about the telescope and science.
9 January 2022
- 13:2613:26, 9 January 2022 diff hist −106 James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: shortened the quote, as the first part of it is not included in the source article.
8 January 2022
- 22:5722:57, 8 January 2022 diff hist +55 Massively multiplayer online game Added reference to Castle Infinity, the first MMOG for children.
7 January 2022
- 16:4216:42, 7 January 2022 diff hist +10 Tabby's Star →An artificial megastructure: Changed from "very low" to "purely speculative," which is in line with the contents of the referenced article.
6 January 2022
- 23:2323:23, 6 January 2022 diff hist −113 Tabby's Star Removed the word "all" as there was no supporting information. I changed it to "other such stars include," which is factual.
- 23:2023:20, 6 January 2022 diff hist −267 Tabby's Star Replaced reference with an updated article that cites one of the same scientists. In this newer article, the scientist concedes that there is no evidence [of a Dyson sphere] and that this scenario is highly unlikely.
4 January 2022
- 21:3221:32, 4 January 2022 diff hist −444 James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: Removed the sentence about the member of the advisory panel resigning. Over 1,200 scientists, engineers and advisors worked on the project, so a single advisor resigning does does not rise to the level of noteworthiness for this paragraph. I left in one of two footnotes to articles that mention this act.
25 December 2021
- 00:1700:17, 25 December 2021 diff hist −3 m James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: deleted "by"
- 00:1700:17, 25 December 2021 diff hist −19 m James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: Deleted "by several scientists." Many articles in Scientific American are by several scientists.
24 December 2021
- 15:1115:11, 24 December 2021 diff hist +42 User:WWDanskin No edit summary current
- 15:1015:10, 24 December 2021 diff hist −128 Elizabeth Warren →Ancestry and Native American relations: removed the "surprise visit" and "standing ovation portion, as they are the title of the article and not directly relevant to the most important point of the sentence: That she was endorsed by Deb Haaland. (Many, many people receive ovations at many, many appearances.) Tag: Reverted
17 December 2021
- 22:2722:27, 17 December 2021 diff hist −1,181 James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: Attempted to present a more complete/balanced presentation of the controversy, with less emotion-filled citations. A more extended discussion belongs on the article about the person, not the telescope.
16 December 2021
- 18:4718:47, 16 December 2021 diff hist −721 James Webb Space Telescope →Controversy over name: Deleted because this is taken out of context. Here is a full article where the author clearly states: “I don’t see him as having any sort of leadership role in the lavender scare,” says Johnson: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/nasa-investigates-renaming-james-webb-space-telescope-after-anti-lgbt-claims/
15 December 2021
- 23:4023:40, 15 December 2021 diff hist −3,420 SoftKey →Broderbund: Deleted this whole section. It was questionably written, confusing, and didn't fit the timeline of the previous section.
- 23:3923:39, 15 December 2021 diff hist +158 SoftKey →Acquisitions from 1994 - 1998: Moved Broderbund to this section. The next section should be deleted as it is a mess...and rife with opinion.
- 23:3623:36, 15 December 2021 diff hist −2,224 SoftKey Deleted a large chunk which appeared to be copied and pasted from somewhere. The syntax did not match the rest of this article.
- 23:3323:33, 15 December 2021 diff hist −12 m SoftKey →Sale to Gores Technology Group: cleaned up extra wording.
- 23:2523:25, 15 December 2021 diff hist −5 m London Eye →Ownership and branding: fixed three typos.
- 23:2423:24, 15 December 2021 diff hist −38 London Eye →Ownership and branding: clarification of how the wheel was "turned blue." Removed redundancy. Removed additional mention of sponsor--as they are mentioned in the previous sentence.
