User contributions for Volty23
A user with 48 edits. Account created on 15 May 2009.
13 May 2024
- 19:5719:57, 13 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Bait-and-switch →Function current
- 19:5619:56, 13 May 2024 diff hist +4 m Bait-and-switch change "higher-priced ones" to "higher-priced products"
5 May 2024
- 22:2022:20, 5 May 2024 diff hist +1 m University of Okoboji reworded radio station sentence and fixed punctuation current
19 April 2024
- 01:5701:57, 19 April 2024 diff hist −12 m Quiet on Set: The Dark Side of Kids TV Changed “The first four episodes aired between March 17 and 18, 2024,” to “aired March 17-18.” There is no “between” consecutive dates.
4 April 2024
- 23:3823:38, 4 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Among the Living →Background: alphabetical order for groups re: Belladonna background singing current
- 23:3623:36, 4 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Among the Living →Background: changed list of influences to alphabetical order
3 April 2024
- 13:4113:41, 3 April 2024 diff hist +1 m The Who by Numbers →Album cover: changed: "in which the band members' bodies are made up of" ... to "on which the band members' bodies are depicted as..."
- 13:3913:39, 3 April 2024 diff hist 0 m The Who by Numbers →Background
- 13:3713:37, 3 April 2024 diff hist +8 m The Who by Numbers →Background: Sharpened wording in the "This was the first album..." segment (the band's first album instead of "their" and "continued through" in stead of "lasted until" early June
31 March 2024
- 13:5313:53, 31 March 2024 diff hist −18 m Archie Manning →NFL career: some language-tightening
13 March 2024
- 02:4702:47, 13 March 2024 diff hist +4 m Kill Tunes →Production: changed "a the Saints' song" to "a song by The Saints."
26 January 2024
- 19:5419:54, 26 January 2024 diff hist −9 m H.O.R.D.E. →History: Corrects poor grammar ("where (bands) had played" instead "played at"
15 December 2023
- 20:3220:32, 15 December 2023 diff hist +1 m Airbnb →History: The company pledged $250 million in payouts to host - added "s" so it's hosts.
13 December 2023
- 15:0215:02, 13 December 2023 diff hist +7 m It's a Beautiful Day (album) →The cover: revised "that George Hunter felt fitted better " to "because George Hunter believed fit better"
6 December 2023
- 16:1316:13, 6 December 2023 diff hist 0 m List of NFL nicknames →Rules named after NFL figures
- 16:1216:12, 6 December 2023 diff hist −10 m List of NFL nicknames →Rules named after NFL figures: edited some wording in Jerome Bettis section (e.g., "toss coin into the air" instead of "in the air")
1 September 2023
- 22:0822:08, 1 September 2023 diff hist −16 m Metro Conference →History: in changed "replaced its spot" to "took its spot" even though verbiage still is weak
20 August 2023
- 18:3318:33, 20 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Western Athletic Conference update to previous edit - swaps alpha position of Texas and Utah
- 18:3218:32, 20 August 2023 diff hist −1 m Western Athletic Conference re-orders list of states so it's all alphabetical (swaps position of Texas and Washington)
10 August 2023
- 02:1502:15, 10 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Cultural influence of the September 11 attacks →Media response: Changed "endless" to "numerous" in "... reproductions in mass media and popular culture ..."
22 July 2023
- 18:4818:48, 22 July 2023 diff hist −13 m WNBA playoffs →Tiebreaker procedures: changed wording of intro (prior to the bulleted list)
11 July 2023
- 23:4523:45, 11 July 2023 diff hist −34 m Slick Watts →College: changed "would play," "would go on to" and such to past tense.
2 July 2023
- 15:1415:14, 2 July 2023 diff hist −1 m Moms for Liberty →Alleged harassment and threats towards teachers and public schools: Changes 'towards' to 'toward'
1 July 2023
- 18:0518:05, 1 July 2023 diff hist +3 m Nicolas Cage →1981–1988: Early work and breakthrough: changed "The Cotton Club saw him play..." to: In "The Cotton Club," he portrayed...
2 May 2023
- 10:5810:58, 2 May 2023 diff hist −6 m Seattle Kraken →Uniforms: drops "first" in "first unveiled." Unveiling assumes it's "first."
29 April 2023
- 22:2722:27, 29 April 2023 diff hist −9 m Allen Lazard changed "originally signed" to "initially signed" ... and "also has played" (for Green Bay) instead of "has also played"
24 April 2023
- 03:3603:36, 24 April 2023 diff hist −2 m The Cover of "Rolling Stone" →History and description: changed "usage" to "use" -- drug "use." "Usage" is stilted.
11 April 2023
10 April 2023
- 23:2523:25, 10 April 2023 diff hist +31 m Iowa Hawkeyes men's basketball in the intro -- changed NIT Tournaments to National Invitational Tournament(s) - avoid redundancy
- 04:0904:09, 10 April 2023 diff hist −70 m 1979–80 NFL playoffs →NFC: Los Angeles Rams 9, Tampa Bay Buccaneers 0
- 04:0704:07, 10 April 2023 diff hist −10 m 1979–80 NFL playoffs →AFC: Pittsburgh Steelers 27, Houston Oilers 13: Revised: The Steelers would then score 10 unanswered points ... to "scored 10 straight points"
5 April 2023
- 21:3621:36, 5 April 2023 diff hist −8 Big East–Big 12 Battle →2023 Tied (0–0){{Cite web |title=Matchups set for 2023 Big East-Big 12 Battle |url=https://collegehoopstoday.com/index.php/rothstein-files/matchups-set-for-2023-big-east-big-12-battle/}}
- 17:3217:32, 5 April 2023 diff hist +2 m Calvin and Hobbes →Merchandising: Changed "It would be near impossible" to "nearly impossible"
30 March 2023
- 00:3500:35, 30 March 2023 diff hist −6 m Meat Puppets →Major label career (1991–1995): In "Forbidden Places" segment, changed "highly sought-after" to "highly sought"
29 March 2023
- 15:2715:27, 29 March 2023 diff hist −35 m The Viscaynes →Background: The Viscaynes were a high school group that Sylvester Stewart became a member of ... The Viscaynes was a high school group that Sylvester Stewart joined around 1961 when he was 17.
25 March 2023
- 20:3920:39, 25 March 2023 diff hist 0 Iowa State Cyclones women's basketball →NCAA Tournament history: Revised the second instance of "2021" to "2022" (original link should be correct
10 March 2023
- 22:2622:26, 10 March 2023 diff hist +1 m Josh Pastner →Memphis: "succeeding" instead of "replacing" Calipari
7 March 2023
- 04:0904:09, 7 March 2023 diff hist −1 m 1980 NCAA Division I basketball tournament Minor edits in "Structurally speaking" graf -- grammar/sentence structure.
11 February 2023
- 04:3204:32, 11 February 2023 diff hist +1 Greg Heiar →Coaching career: indefinately -- misspelling indefinitely
- 04:3104:31, 11 February 2023 diff hist −4 Greg Heiar →Coaching career: mismodification -- "... plan by four students that resulted ..." -- changed to "... students, resulting in"
- 04:2704:27, 11 February 2023 diff hist −20 Greg Heiar →Coaching career: the "would" thing again
- 04:2404:24, 11 February 2023 diff hist −9 Greg Heiar →Playing career: replaces "would coach/would play" bad writing style
19 January 2023
- 00:3900:39, 19 January 2023 diff hist −1 m John Thompson III →Georgetown: A 9-4 conference record (changed from "an 9-4 record"
28 December 2022
- 15:2215:22, 28 December 2022 diff hist +6 m Nathan Scheelhaase →Iowa State: commas and changed "came" to "became"
- 15:1915:19, 28 December 2022 diff hist −16 m Nathan Scheelhaase →College career: In college segment, changed "would start" and "would lead" to "started" and "led" .... also "more than a decade" instead of "over"
24 December 2022
- 03:0703:07, 24 December 2022 diff hist +1 m The Pleasure Principle (album) →Composition and release: corrected "were" to "where" in the quote ... "was evolving and where it would take us"
7 April 2021
- 01:2601:26, 7 April 2021 diff hist −4 m Iowa State Armory removes unnecessary "the" in front of Hilton Coliseum
26 March 2021
- 17:2917:29, 26 March 2021 diff hist 0 m Georges Niang →College career
