User contributions for Timwalkerjr

17 October 2024

• 20:5420:54, 17 October 2024 diff hist +16 m Lisa Su Minor phrasing & punctuation improvements.

10 October 2024

• 20:5020:50, 10 October 2024 diff hist −28 m Joy Buolamwini →Early life and education: Fixed spacing and repetitive wording in the sentence about pole vaulting and basketball.

4 April 2024

• 19:5419:54, 4 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Clarence Seedorf Clarified phrasing and cleaned up punctuation in the paragraph on Seedorf's Champions League wins with three different clubs.

24 March 2024

• 22:5722:57, 24 March 2024 diff hist +1 m George Cukor →Uncredited contributing work: Corrected a spacing error.

6 November 2023

• 20:4220:42, 6 November 2023 diff hist 0 m Intel →Customers: Updated 2022 revenue percentages attributed to Dell, Lenovo, and HP based on figures in 2022 Form 10-K (reached via the existing link to the SEC filing in the current Wikipedia footnote).

1 November 2023

• 20:1320:13, 1 November 2023 diff hist +1 m Thomas Tuchel →Personal life: Minor phrasing edit to correct a misplaced modifier.

22 October 2023

• 14:3914:39, 22 October 2023 diff hist +1 m Lafcadio Hearn →Emigration to Cincinnati: Changed this from "Emigration to Cincinnati" to "Immigration to Cincinnati" because "immigration" is more apt when the emphasis is on the place a person is migrating *to*.
• 13:4013:40, 22 October 2023 diff hist +2 m Lafcadio Hearn →Emigration to Ireland and abandonment: Minor edit to clarify an antecedent.
• 13:3013:30, 22 October 2023 diff hist +5 m Lafcadio Hearn →Emigration to Ireland and abandonment: Minor rephrasing to correct a misplaced modifier.

12 October 2023

• 21:4921:49, 12 October 2023 diff hist +4 m Avril Lavigne Minor rewording to fix clunky phrasing in the "Relationships" section.

7 September 2023

• 19:4619:46, 7 September 2023 diff hist 0 m List of telecom companies in India Minor tweak for better readability: Corrected the pie chart of mobile operators so that the segments would be arranged in order of size (which makes much more sense visually) rather than alphabetically (which was confusing).

1 May 2023

• 14:2514:25, 1 May 2023 diff hist −3 m Apollo and Daphne →Characters: Minor phrasing correction.

13 March 2023

• 14:3014:30, 13 March 2023 diff hist +34 m Guillermo del Toro →Awards and nominations: Corrected a preposition and slightly clarified the lead-in sentence before the table.

28 January 2023

• 23:3823:38, 28 January 2023 diff hist +6 m Daniel Craig Removed a stray comma and changed two words to improve phrasing ("five installments in the film series" rather than "five films in the film series").

20 September 2022

• 14:4714:47, 20 September 2022 diff hist +2 m 2022–23 FA Cup qualifying rounds Corrected a minor grammatical error in the "Extra Preliminary Round" section.

20 April 2022

• 14:2914:29, 20 April 2022 diff hist +3 m Thor Heyerdahl Fixed a tiny problem with a misplaced comma in the description of his archival collection.

11 August 2021

• 20:4920:49, 11 August 2021 diff hist +120 m List of career achievements by Lionel Messi Added reference to Olympics official site for 2008 gold medal.

5 August 2021

• 02:5402:54, 5 August 2021 diff hist +269 Anníe Mist Þórisdóttir Added a sentence + reference at the end of "Personal Life" about her postpartum depression.
• 02:4902:49, 5 August 2021 diff hist +2 m Anníe Mist Þórisdóttir Corrected Instagram link on last footnote.

3 July 2021

• 17:0017:00, 3 July 2021 diff hist −1,619 Karen (slang) →Notable examples: Removed paragraph on Rachel Dawn Ruit — she was called variations on "Karen" in a couple of tabloid headlines, but there's nothing very substantive in the cited sources connecting her to a specific term as with "Kroger Karen," "Kidz Bop Karen," or others.
• 14:3414:34, 3 July 2021 diff hist +79 N Talk:Karen (pejorative) Timwalkerjr moved page Talk:Karen (pejorative) to Talk:Karen (slang) over redirect: Other similar words ("Becky," "Kyle," etc.) are referred to in their titles as "(slang)" rather than "(pejorative)" — with the pejorative nature of the word being stated in the short description and body text. current Tag: New redirect
• 14:3414:34, 3 July 2021 diff hist 0 m Talk:Karen (slang) Timwalkerjr moved page Talk:Karen (pejorative) to Talk:Karen (slang) over redirect: Other similar words ("Becky," "Kyle," etc.) are referred to in their titles as "(slang)" rather than "(pejorative)" — with the pejorative nature of the word being stated in the short description and body text.
• 14:3414:34, 3 July 2021 diff hist +74 N Karen (pejorative) Timwalkerjr moved page Karen (pejorative) to Karen (slang) over redirect: Other similar words ("Becky," "Kyle," etc.) are referred to in their titles as "(slang)" rather than "(pejorative)" — with the pejorative nature of the word being stated in the short description and body text. current Tag: New redirect
• 14:3414:34, 3 July 2021 diff hist 0 m Karen (slang) Timwalkerjr moved page Karen (pejorative) to Karen (slang) over redirect: Other similar words ("Becky," "Kyle," etc.) are referred to in their titles as "(slang)" rather than "(pejorative)" — with the pejorative nature of the word being stated in the short description and body text.

12 May 2021

• 23:5823:58, 12 May 2021 diff hist 0 m List of Premier League seasons Updated "Since the inaugural season in 1992–93, 45 teams have competed in the Premier League" to read "...49 teams..." — double-checked the accurate number a couple of ways, including against the list of all current and past teams at the bottom of this entry.

29 January 2017

• 22:2322:23, 29 January 2017 diff hist +2 m Indonesian language →Vocabulary: Cleaned up minor syntax and grammar errors.
• 22:2022:20, 29 January 2017 diff hist −1 m Indonesian language →Vocabulary

26 June 2011

• 02:3302:33, 26 June 2011 diff hist +2,826 Rick Bass →Works: Rebuilt this section using publisher's info -- added several missing books, organized into chronological Fiction and Nonfiction sections.

27 February 2010

• 16:5016:50, 27 February 2010 diff hist 0 m J. G. Ballard →Full-time writing career: Fixed a comma splice.

22 January 2010

• 20:2920:29, 22 January 2010 diff hist −1 m Stephen King bibliography →Complete list of works in chronological order: Fixed a minor typo (changed "divorceê" to "divorcé").

18 November 2008

• 23:4923:49, 18 November 2008 diff hist +116 James Fallows →Books: Added entry for "Postcards from Tomorrow Square," per Knopf site and Publisher's Weekly.

7 November 2008

• 22:4322:43, 7 November 2008 diff hist −2 m Clint Eastwood →Awards: fixed typo
• 22:4022:40, 7 November 2008 diff hist +33 m Clint Eastwood →Directing: corrected reference
• 22:3722:37, 7 November 2008 diff hist +134 Clint Eastwood →Directing: Added reference for recent musical score composer credits.

4 November 2008

• 01:5001:50, 4 November 2008 diff hist −33 The Dresden Files →Novelettes: Backup novelette has been published, per Subterranean site.

3 August 2008

• 21:2121:21, 3 August 2008 diff hist +1 m Martin Scorsese Fixed a typo.
• 21:1721:17, 3 August 2008 diff hist +1 m Alan Alda →After M*A*S*H: Fixed a typo

25 July 2008

• 15:1615:16, 25 July 2008 diff hist +137 Showtime Added reference to L.A. Lakers "Showtime" era of 1980s.

9 July 2008

• 22:3022:30, 9 July 2008 diff hist −32 W. D. Wetherell Removed "needs references" tag.
• 22:2922:29, 9 July 2008 diff hist +78 m W. D. Wetherell Added a note about the rivers/fishing themes of his nonfiction work.
• 22:2422:24, 9 July 2008 diff hist +137 m W. D. Wetherell Added References section & a reference for Strauss prize.
• 22:1822:18, 9 July 2008 diff hist +276 m W. D. Wetherell Added external links.
• 22:1222:12, 9 July 2008 diff hist +825 W. D. Wetherell Expanded intro text slightly & added sections for fiction & nonfiction books. More to come.

3 July 2008

• 01:2001:20, 3 July 2008 diff hist +1 m Jigsaw (Marvel Comics) Subbed "unusual for "unique" in last sentence of overview.

22 June 2008

• 20:2520:25, 22 June 2008 diff hist +1 m Emirate of Sharjah Fixed a typo.

11 June 2008

• 16:2716:27, 11 June 2008 diff hist +828 Eliot Asinof Major revision based on New York Times obituary.

29 April 2008

• 02:1802:18, 29 April 2008 diff hist +11 m Foul ball Inserted missing words in description: "and the batter returns to home plate" instead of "and returns to home plate."

27 April 2008

• 22:1922:19, 27 April 2008 diff hist +16 m Sarah Bird Added a proper lead sentence; improved formatting of bibliography (separated Tory Cates novels under separate subhead).

13 February 2008

• 17:3917:39, 13 February 2008 diff hist −23 m D&B Hoovers →Operations: Per co site, Hoover's no longer publishes Company of the Day items.

29 January 2008

• 13:1513:15, 29 January 2008 diff hist +24 m Bill Belichick →Family life: Cleaned up grammar.