User contributions for Terrygrim3
A user with 294 edits. Account created on 14 February 2017.
11 May 2024
- 00:5000:50, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Nüshu →Jie Bai: Corrected several spelling mistakes current
7 May 2024
- 11:2711:27, 7 May 2024 diff hist −34 m Orbitrap →History: removed redundant link to Alexander Makarov- already in previous paragraph.
6 May 2024
- 22:0622:06, 6 May 2024 diff hist +34 m Skymark Airlines →Low-cost airline operations (1996–2010): put in a quick definition of dry-leasing current
22 April 2024
- 14:2014:20, 22 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Neerja Bhanot →Hijacking: from Bombay to the New York via Karachi > from Bombay to New York via Karachi
22 March 2024
- 00:0000:00, 22 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Natalie Portman →Personal life and endorsements: Moved section on extramarital/divorce to where it made more chronological sense. No changes to content
11 March 2024
- 18:2718:27, 11 March 2024 diff hist −1 m Mila Kunis →Personal life: Moved the Ashton Kutcher dating/marriage paragraph so chronologically in order and just prior to more related 2nd baby/renovation.
10 March 2024
- 12:2112:21, 10 March 2024 diff hist −15 m Jesse Eisenberg →Personal life: Changed the sentence order of Bloomington aspect to make more linear
2 March 2024
- 21:3321:33, 2 March 2024 diff hist +1 Brewing →Cool fermentation: ales yeasts > ales' yeasts Could be ale yeasts, to match lager yeast. Plural of yeast makes ales possessive.
20 January 2024
- 03:0303:03, 20 January 2024 diff hist +7 m 1883 (TV series) →Recurring: recently lost her husband > loses her husband in an accident case more consistent with other bios
- 03:0003:00, 20 January 2024 diff hist 0 m 1883 (TV series) →Episodes: turns > draws Think that's more accurate
- 02:4902:49, 20 January 2024 diff hist +15 m 1883 (TV series) →Main: undisciplined > unconventional She was highly disciplined; just felt restricted by her mother's expectations
11 January 2024
- 18:4918:49, 11 January 2024 diff hist −4 m Chaldean Catholics →Identity and names: reorganized sentence about post-dissolution exodus
26 December 2023
- 21:1821:18, 26 December 2023 diff hist +21 m Waccamaw River →Description: the region > European settlers in the region
9 December 2023
- 18:1518:15, 9 December 2023 diff hist +103 m The Mindy Project →Plot: added links to uncited actors
15 October 2023
- 16:2916:29, 15 October 2023 diff hist +96 m Euonymus europaeus →Habitat and ecology: Added links to individual W8 species and W8 Woodland
27 August 2023
- 21:3121:31, 27 August 2023 diff hist −102 m The Screwtape Letters →Other literary sequels: J.B.. > J.B. also removed "Cyprus, J.B. (2022). ''Letters to Bentrock: A Demon's Guide To Trapping Prey''. ISBN 978-1639772780." which appears to be redundant.
28 July 2023
- 18:4118:41, 28 July 2023 diff hist +10 D. L. Geary Brewing Company First couple sentences of P4 are very confusing- I hope I've fixed it
26 July 2023
- 21:5721:57, 26 July 2023 diff hist 0 m George S. Patton →Early life: 1903 to 1904 and, though he > 1903 to 1904, and though he Appears comma in wrong place
12 July 2023
- 12:3612:36, 12 July 2023 diff hist −11 m John Stockton →Regular Season: Includes Chris Paul (achieved this 3 times) > Chris Paul achieved this 3 times If they are the only two, "includes" is confusing
8 July 2023
- 12:3912:39, 8 July 2023 diff hist −3 m Sidmouth →History: from an illness > of pneumonia "Prince Edward Augustus, Duke of Kent and Strathearn" article states pneumonia
7 July 2023
- 23:3023:30, 7 July 2023 diff hist +50 m Turkmenistan →History: history of Turkmenistan begins with its annexation by the Achaemenid Empire of Ancient Iran. Later, in the 8th century AD > history of Turkmenistan begins with its annexation by the Achaemenid Empire of Ancient Iran. After centuries of turmoil, over a thousand years later, in the 8th century AD "Later" seems like it happened shortly after; years not over a millennium later
2 July 2023
- 22:4022:40, 2 July 2023 diff hist +16 m Asian sheepshead wrasse Fixed disambiguation for Tateyama, Chiba
- 22:3522:35, 2 July 2023 diff hist +11 m Aral Sea →Native fish: extinction > extirpation (the termination of a species in a chosen geographic area of study, though it still exists elsewhere. Local extinctions are contrasted with global extinctions.) decimated > greatly reduced
26 June 2023
- 21:3621:36, 26 June 2023 diff hist +4 m Asian sheepshead wrasse link to Tateyama (there is no Tateyama Bay article in Wikipedia) Tag: Disambiguation links added
20 June 2023
- 13:0913:09, 20 June 2023 diff hist −2 m Gaspard II de Coligny →Massacre: between > among: between 2; among >2
- 13:0713:07, 20 June 2023 diff hist +2 m Gaspard II de Coligny →Assassination attempt: furious > furiously (or could be ", furious," )
19 June 2023
- 19:2119:21, 19 June 2023 diff hist +3 m Niccolò Machiavelli →Life: defeated > conquered. Defeated sounds neutral, while Florence was the aggressor and conquered. did not last > was short-lived
17 June 2023
- 16:5916:59, 17 June 2023 diff hist +115 Siliguri Very interesting article, but I hope I was able to polish it a little; mostly with addition of some articles, verbs and minor changes to sentence structure. Still unsure about Dolka (pomegranate?) forest so left as is
12 June 2023
- 22:0322:03, 12 June 2023 diff hist +21 m Carrabassett River →South Branch: "State Route 16 & 27" not a link to a Wiki page; split to Maine State Route 16 & Maine State Route 27 links
- 21:1421:14, 12 June 2023 diff hist +112 m Kennebec River →Flood of 1987: Thought title of ref would be helpful
- 20:1920:19, 12 June 2023 diff hist +56 m Kennebec River →Flood of 1987: Had difficulty verifying unreferenced flow/flood level claims; USGS report seems comparable AND reliable
- 19:3919:39, 12 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Piscataquis River Changed the conversion of flow to metric from just the low volumes to high and low volumes. Wish there weren't so many sig figs...
- 18:0418:04, 12 June 2023 diff hist +12 m Pope Clement VII Although mentioned several times later, it should be noted early that Pope Leo X was his cousin
- 17:5417:54, 12 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Pope Leo X →Protestant Reformation: It was also under Leo that > Leo was pope during the: "under Leo" sounds like he oversaw rather than opposed; |Lutheranism spread into Scandinavia]] > |spread of Lutheranism into Scandinavia]] to restore flow
10 June 2023
- 17:2317:23, 10 June 2023 diff hist +3 Pazzi conspiracy →Background: revolved round the > was the status of the (or at least "revolved around the")
- 17:1517:15, 10 June 2023 diff hist +90 m Orsi Checco and Ludovico have no Wiki article, but seem as important as, say, a National League/League Two footballer with 51 goals to his name. current
- 02:0302:03, 10 June 2023 diff hist −1 m Cosimo III de' Medici removed a dangling space: Gian Gastone , Tuscany > Gian Gastone, Tuscany
8 June 2023
- 12:5112:51, 8 June 2023 diff hist +3 m Gian Gastone de' Medici →Marriage and Bohemia (1697–1708): hailed > described: hailed usually positive, not derisive
6 June 2023
- 19:3519:35, 6 June 2023 diff hist 0 m George S. Patton →Postwar: Chronologically I think this sentence order makes more sense- no changes to any of the sentences.
30 May 2023
- 01:1101:11, 30 May 2023 diff hist +4 m List of largest cities throughout history →List of the most populous human settlements over time: Jinling is hyperlinked in the intro, way way earlier
29 May 2023
- 23:5523:55, 29 May 2023 diff hist −38 m Nicobar Islands →Colonial period: Minor cleaning- removed a few extra words and broke up a really long run-on sentence. Interesting section. Not sure what "ill|second La Marmora Cabinet|it" does so leaving it for whoever monitors this.
13 May 2023
- 21:5721:57, 13 May 2023 diff hist +14 m Descendants of George III children, grandchildren > children and legitimate grandchildren Some illegitimate issue listed in next section, but these are all legitimate, and exclude illegitimate current
8 May 2023
- 21:3921:39, 8 May 2023 diff hist −43 m Anne, Duchess of Exeter →First marriage: (1461<ref>Oxford, Bodleian Library MS Digby 57, f. 2*r</ref> – between 26 August 1467 and 6 June 1474) > (1461<ref>Oxford, Bodleian Library MS Digby 57, f. 2*r</ref>): looks like cut & paste error from a previous edit
7 May 2023
- 23:3523:35, 7 May 2023 diff hist 0 m George Washington →Constitutional Convention of 1787: "anarchy and confusion", > "anarchy and confusion," comma belongs before endquote
2 May 2023
- 19:4319:43, 2 May 2023 diff hist +114 m Albert Gallatin →Legacy: Added his appearance on U.S. stamps
- 19:2219:22, 2 May 2023 diff hist +7 m Louisiana Purchase →Negotiation: "doubled" > "nearly doubled" Area prior to LP was 864,746 mi^2
29 April 2023
- 20:1920:19, 29 April 2023 diff hist +2 Milton, Massachusetts →Indigenous peoples: "tens of thousands of years" > "more than ten thousand years" "tens of thousands of years" implies 20,000, 30,000 when archelogical evidence suggests <<15000
23 April 2023
- 16:3516:35, 23 April 2023 diff hist +79 m Quentin Keynes Stayed with him for a few days in 1980 and was privileged to explore his library- they were exquisite.
19 April 2023
- 00:1000:10, 19 April 2023 diff hist +102 m Tulare Lake Thought others might want to know more about the largest freshwater lake west of the Mississippi River and the largest freshwater lake entirely in the US Tag: Reverted
20 March 2023
- 17:2217:22, 20 March 2023 diff hist +200 m Lincoln Highway →Lincoln statues: Added Abraham Lincoln Memorial Monument at Sherman Summit Rest Area. I'll bet there are oth.ers
