User contributions for Tempshill
A user with 9,225 edits. Account created on 21 March 2003.
21 April 2011
- 22:4622:46, 21 April 2011 diff hist +234 Wikipedia talk:Naming conventions (Korean)/Disputed names →RFC on East Sea use in Korea-specific topics
22 February 2011
- 23:1523:15, 22 February 2011 diff hist +8 m German cruiser Admiral Graf Spee →Final docking: "Why?" tag on being buried from public knowledge for 60 years.
- 22:5422:54, 22 February 2011 diff hist +119 Computer Bismarck Add in last sentence of the intro that it has been called the first serious wargame for a microcomputer, with a reference.
- 22:5022:50, 22 February 2011 diff hist −2 m Strategic Simulations change italics to quotes for the ref
- 22:4922:49, 22 February 2011 diff hist +28 Strategic Simulations Reflist tag
- 22:4922:49, 22 February 2011 diff hist +301 Strategic Simulations →History
- 22:3522:35, 22 February 2011 diff hist +174 User talk:Frecklefoot →You: new section
- 22:2322:23, 22 February 2011 diff hist +3,208 User talk:WhisperToMe →Artistic depictions
- 20:1320:13, 22 February 2011 diff hist +525 User talk:WhisperToMe →Artistic depictions: new section
- 20:1120:11, 22 February 2011 diff hist −14 User talk:Tempshill Not here? Outrageous. Remove tag
24 June 2010
26 April 2010
- 21:2221:22, 26 April 2010 diff hist −444 Star Wars (film) →Radio drama: Remove the sentence about canon. This is the only mention of canon on the article. We should keep it out, IMO, as only super fanboys know what it is, or want to know.
- 21:1021:10, 26 April 2010 diff hist +332 Talk:Star Wars (film) →Novelization sales: new section
- 21:0621:06, 26 April 2010 diff hist +101 Star Wars (film) →Cinematic influence: Improve the Ebert quote from a limp description and emphasize that it was transformative. Improve parody line.
- 21:0121:01, 26 April 2010 diff hist 0 m Star Wars (film) →Cinematic and literary allusions: Typo
- 21:0021:00, 26 April 2010 diff hist −19 Star Wars (film) →Writing: Typo, and try to explain the out-of-context Apocalypse Now claim. (I think it should probably be minimized in importance or removed.)
- 18:3918:39, 26 April 2010 diff hist +151 Talk:Star Wars (film) →Parodies
- 18:3918:39, 26 April 2010 diff hist +925 Talk:Star Wars (film) →Ford casting: new section
- 18:3518:35, 26 April 2010 diff hist −16 Star Wars (film) →Cast: Remove unnecessary mind reading flourish in Daniels quote
- 18:3018:30, 26 April 2010 diff hist −281 Star Wars (film) →Cast: Copy edit. Remove Wedge, who certainly gets less screen time than the unmentioned Uncle Owen, for example.
- 18:2418:24, 26 April 2010 diff hist +62 Star Wars (film) →Plot: copy edit
- 18:0518:05, 26 April 2010 diff hist +286 Video game publisher →Investor interest: add EA is in the Fortune 500
20 April 2010
- 02:3202:32, 20 April 2010 diff hist +342 Talk:Morotai Mutiny →The point: new section
16 April 2010
- 18:1418:14, 16 April 2010 diff hist −2,362 20th century Remove "Events" section. This should be an encyclopedia article about the 20th century and not a miscellaneous list of hundreds of events. There's already a link to a subarticle for that.
- 18:1118:11, 16 April 2010 diff hist +156 20th century →Summary: Copy edit the section
- 17:4217:42, 16 April 2010 diff hist −66 20th century Copy edit the first section
- 17:3217:32, 16 April 2010 diff hist +79 The PJs →Characters: Add back the portrait of the characters. It's a non-free image with fair use asserted.
1 April 2010
- 21:2721:27, 1 April 2010 diff hist +256 File talk:Mauna Loa Carbon Dioxide-en.svg No edit summary
21 March 2010
- 06:1206:12, 21 March 2010 diff hist +311 Nixon White House tapes recording system removal
- 06:0606:06, 21 March 2010 diff hist +234 Talk:Nixon White House tapes →Recording system dismantling: new section
15 March 2010
- 22:0422:04, 15 March 2010 diff hist +4 m Apollo 1 →1961 Soviet oxygen fire: "died" -> "had died" to emphasize it was earlier
- 22:0122:01, 15 March 2010 diff hist +67 Apollo 1 →Command module design worries: Some copy editing, albeit mostly on fact-tagged sentences.
- 21:4421:44, 15 March 2010 diff hist +25 Space Shuttle Columbia disaster →Initial investigation: Fact-tag weaselly "This led to many accusations of environmental pressures leading to the foam strikes."
- 21:4321:43, 15 March 2010 diff hist +10 Space Shuttle Columbia disaster →Recovery of debris: "which" tag on the claim that "the landing gear" was found. The cited source does not say.
- 21:2321:23, 15 March 2010 diff hist +792 Talk:Space Shuttle Challenger disaster →PEAPs photo: new section
- 21:1921:19, 15 March 2010 diff hist +146 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster →Cause and time of death: Insert PEAPs photo, but it's from a later Shuttle flight. I have mixed feelings; see discussion page.
- 21:1621:16, 15 March 2010 diff hist +25 Personal Egress Air Pack Fact-tag that the PEAPs were removed after the Challenger disaster.
- 21:1521:15, 15 March 2010 diff hist +97 Personal Egress Air Pack Add photo
- 20:4520:45, 15 March 2010 diff hist −80 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster Remove from intro " and inspired the 1990 television movie, ''Challenger''." Undue weight in the intro.
9 March 2010
- 01:1401:14, 9 March 2010 diff hist +98 Skipping rope →Jumping rope techniques: add photo
- 01:0601:06, 9 March 2010 diff hist +295 Talk:Sikorsky SH-60 Seahawk →MH-60B: new section
27 February 2010
- 00:4500:45, 27 February 2010 diff hist +24 Space Race →Sputnik 1: Add "replica pictured" to sputnik caption, per the note on the image page on Commons
- 00:4200:42, 27 February 2010 diff hist +20 Huntington's disease →Ethics: Fix UK insurers' line to "The United Kingdom's insurance companies have agreed that until 2014 they will not use this information when writing most insurance policies."
26 February 2010
- 22:4322:43, 26 February 2010 diff hist +12 Costa Rica →Government: Clarify tag on the coy, smirking claim, "...their presidential election history shows otherwise".
- 22:4322:43, 26 February 2010 diff hist −39 Costa Rica →Government: Replace Arias photo with the now-more-relevant Chinchilla photo
- 22:4122:41, 26 February 2010 diff hist +68 Laura Chinchilla Improve the photo. Move the previous photo to a new location further down the page.
23 February 2010
- 20:1120:11, 23 February 2010 diff hist +254 Wikipedia:Reference desk/Miscellaneous →Salvaging an aircraft-carrier overshot submerged plane.
- 20:0920:09, 23 February 2010 diff hist +462 Wikipedia:Reference desk/Language →Use of stock phrases by the media
- 19:3819:38, 23 February 2010 diff hist +23 Aluminaut →1969: Rescuing a fellow DSV: fix Mizar link
- 19:3719:37, 23 February 2010 diff hist +37 Aluminaut →1969: Rescuing a fellow DSV: copy edit, move a sentence
