User contributions for Szagory
A user with 860 edits. Account created on 3 June 2009.
27 May 2024
- 13:4113:41, 27 May 2024 diff hist +381 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 13:3213:32, 27 May 2024 diff hist +1 User talk:Szagory →Short lead
- 13:3113:31, 27 May 2024 diff hist +1,285 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 13:1213:12, 27 May 2024 diff hist +742 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 13:0113:01, 27 May 2024 diff hist +69 Love Lies Bleeding (2024 film) Minor addition to WP:Lead. Also re-grouped info about director/writers with info about stars.
- 12:5112:51, 27 May 2024 diff hist +14 User talk:Szagory →Short lead
- 12:5012:50, 27 May 2024 diff hist −6 User talk:Szagory →Short lead
- 12:4912:49, 27 May 2024 diff hist +1,250 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 12:3612:36, 27 May 2024 diff hist +158 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 12:3512:35, 27 May 2024 diff hist +69 User talk:Szagory →Short lead
- 12:2812:28, 27 May 2024 diff hist +765 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 12:2012:20, 27 May 2024 diff hist +192 User talk:Szagory →Short lead
- 12:1712:17, 27 May 2024 diff hist +602 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 12:1312:13, 27 May 2024 diff hist +688 User talk:Szagory →Short lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 11:2711:27, 27 May 2024 diff hist −28 Love Lies Bleeding (2024 film) Removed {{shortlead}} added to article by user:Koavf (revision message: "This is the barest possible premise and does not represent the plot per WP:LEAD. This is a start at least") - WP:Lead contains all the information that film-related articles usually have, I can't think of anything else that could be added there (general info about genre, director and stars; premiere and release info; critical response). That tag was wrongly applied back on 7 May as lead back then had all the info.
26 May 2024
- 00:4000:40, 26 May 2024 diff hist −22 Adagio (2023 film) →Plot: : another correction in WP:Plot: "Vasco finally smothers the criminal to death" - should be "strangles" (or "strangles dead"). Couple of other improvements to wording in that paragraph. current
25 May 2024
- 23:0023:00, 25 May 2024 diff hist −13 Adagio (2023 film) →Awards and nominations: : renamed to usual "Accolades".
- 22:5922:59, 25 May 2024 diff hist −18 Adagio (2023 film) →Plot: : correction to wording in WP:Plot: not "immortalise", it should be "incriminate".
- 22:5522:55, 25 May 2024 diff hist −1 Adagio (2023 film) →Reception: : correction to approval rating from RT in my previous edit ({{Rotten Tomatoes prose}}) - it's 8 reviews, not 80. Apologies for the typo.
- 22:4622:46, 25 May 2024 diff hist +371 Adagio (2023 film) Split WP:Lead into 2 customary paragraphs for film-related articles. In "Awards and nominations" table's caption largely duplicates section's heading - in accordance with WP:ACCESSIBILITY made it visible only for screen readers. Added approval ratings for film from RT and Metacritic. Fixed tenses in WP:Plot. Corrected tense in "Release".
- 20:1220:12, 25 May 2024 diff hist −2 Blood for Dust In WP:Plot: "back at home at a local church service..." - after pondering the matter a little, it would sound better: "back home at a church service". Added a comma. current
- 19:0719:07, 25 May 2024 diff hist +12 Blood for Dust Minor correction to WP:Plot in my previous revision: it was first drug- and gun-running run for Cliff, not for Ricky (as might be assumed from wording in my previous revision).
- 18:5318:53, 25 May 2024 diff hist +1,095 Blood for Dust →Premise: : added WP:Plot and renamed section to "Plot".
- 00:2500:25, 25 May 2024 diff hist +234 Seize Them! Changes throughout the article: renamed "Synopsis" to WP:Plot. Added empty "Reception" with {{Expand section}}. current
24 May 2024
- 23:5423:54, 24 May 2024 diff hist +30 The Death of Dick Long Split WP:Lead into 2 customary paragraphs for film-related articles. current
23 May 2024
- 23:3623:36, 23 May 2024 diff hist +24 Kit Harington →Theatre: : another table caption made visible only to screen readers with Template:Screen reader-only - for WP:ACCESSIBILITY.
- 23:3323:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist +92 Kit Harington →Filmography: : All table captions duplicate section headings - as recommended on Template:Screen reader-only, made them visible only to screen readers (for accessibility).
- 19:2819:28, 23 May 2024 diff hist +40 The Innocent (2022 film) →Awards and nominations: : table caption duplicates section heading - made it visible only for screen reader as per recommendation in Template:Screen reader-only. current
- 09:5209:52, 23 May 2024 diff hist +115 Everybody Hates Johan Correction in WP:Lead: "on autistic spectrum", not "in". Added empty WP:Plot with {{no plot}}. Added empty "Reception" with {{expand section}}.
- 09:4409:44, 23 May 2024 diff hist +39 Coup de chance Corrected tenses in WP:Lead and WP:Plot. current
20 May 2024
- 22:5122:51, 20 May 2024 diff hist +48 Creative Control (film) Split WP:Lead into 2 customary paragraphs. Added {{more plot}} to WP:Plot (which has just one single sentence). current
- 22:0422:04, 20 May 2024 diff hist +45 Blood for Dust Added to last sentence of WP:Lead that critical response to film is "generally favourable" - on the basis of approval rating from RT and Metacritic, and from 2 critiques indicative of generally positive response, also taking accolades into account; approval rating from Metacritic indicates "average or mixed reviews", but I guess that fits into "generally positive", right?
- 21:5421:54, 20 May 2024 diff hist +201 Blood for Dust →Critical response: : added approval rating from Metacritic using {{Metacritic film prose}} - "ref=yes" doesn't work in that template (presumably as with {{Rotten Tomatoes prose}} above), so adding explicit citation, too.
- 20:2720:27, 20 May 2024 diff hist +1 L'Origine du monde →Identity of the model: : in first sentence "Art historians had speculated for years that Courbet's model was his favourite model..." - tenses are misplaced, pluperfect indicates action preceding past tense and surely art historians started speculating about identity of the model AFTER the model served as a model for Courbet. Although swapping tenses around would work ("historians speculated..."), intent here is better expressed by using perfect tense ("have speculated..."). current
- 20:0120:01, 20 May 2024 diff hist 0 Talk:Mothers' Instinct (2024 film) →Critical reception
- 20:0020:00, 20 May 2024 diff hist +869 Talk:Mothers' Instinct (2024 film) →Critical reception: new section Tag: New topic
19 May 2024
- 22:1622:16, 19 May 2024 diff hist +46 Mothers' Instinct (2024 film) Added sentence to WP:Lead about critical response to film ("mixed") - on the basis of approval ratings on RT and Metacritic, and from reading Lodge's critique in "Reception".
17 May 2024
- 23:0923:09, 17 May 2024 diff hist +23 The Dead Don't Hurt Multiple fixes and improvements throughout the article.
- 09:5309:53, 17 May 2024 diff hist +304 IF (film) Updated tense with release info (from "is set to be released" to "was released"). Added box office info for France (I was amazed to discover that French revenue was over $3 million after film's opening weekend!). P.S. BTW, user:MikeAllen - I've noticed that in your last revision you used the spelling "Magician Mouse" for one of the roles in WP:FILMCAST, aren't you contradicting what you wrote earlier today when undoing my revision of The Last Stop in Yuma County, mate?
- 06:4806:48, 17 May 2024 diff hist −166 The Last Stop in Yuma County Removed duplicated ref for Box Office Mojo (one was in release form and other in title form; preferable is the latter because it uses same title ID as in URL, whilst the former uses release ID which doesn't work as identifier for film, I tried previously).
- 06:1606:16, 17 May 2024 diff hist +158 User talk:Szagory →Disambiguation link notification for May 17: Reply Tag: Reply
- 06:1306:13, 17 May 2024 diff hist +22 Sting (film) Fixed disambiguation request left by user:DPL bot for my edit in WP:Infobox.
- 06:0906:09, 17 May 2024 diff hist +39 The Last Stop in Yuma County Fixed two disambiguation requests left by user:DPL bot for my edit in WP:Plot.
- 06:0106:01, 17 May 2024 diff hist +117 Hammarskjöld (film) Added empty WP:Plot with {{no plot}}. Added empty "Reception" section with {{Expand section}}. current
- 05:4405:44, 17 May 2024 diff hist +7 Talk:The Last Stop in Yuma County →In WP:FILMCAST: "Robert Broski as a truck driver" - revision undone by user:MikeAllen
- 05:4205:42, 17 May 2024 diff hist +484 Talk:The Last Stop in Yuma County →In WP:FILMCAST: "Robert Broski as a truck driver" - revision undone by user:MikeAllen
- 05:3405:34, 17 May 2024 diff hist +1,047 Talk:The Last Stop in Yuma County →In WP:FILMCAST: "Robert Broski as a truck driver" - revision undone by user:MikeAllen: new section Tag: New topic
- 04:3704:37, 17 May 2024 diff hist +346 The Last Stop in Yuma County Added "Box office" subsection.
- 04:1204:12, 17 May 2024 diff hist −2 The Last Stop in Yuma County In WP:FILMCAST: changed "a truck driver" to how it's spelled in credits ("Truck Driver"). Tag: Reverted
- 03:5803:58, 17 May 2024 diff hist +877 The Last Stop in Yuma County In WP:Plot; corrections and improvements after watching the film online (also to reduce word count for the section which is close to 800 words). Tag: Disambiguation links added