User contributions for SwanSZ
A user with 463 edits.
15 November 2007
- 21:3221:32, 15 November 2007 diff hist −286 Jennifer Lopez removed ref to possible status as richest Hispanic in Hollywood -- a gossip column isn't considered a credible source --
- 19:2219:22, 15 November 2007 diff hist −15 Jennifer Lopez →Early life: editing for clarity and flow
28 October 2007
- 04:5004:50, 28 October 2007 diff hist +25 Popcorn →How popcorn pops: adding double temperature reference so C & F are given for wider readability
- 04:4604:46, 28 October 2007 diff hist +7 Popcorn →History: fixing a fix
- 04:4404:44, 28 October 2007 diff hist +30 Popcorn →History: mostly proofreading for clarity
- 04:3804:38, 28 October 2007 diff hist −577 Popcorn →History: challenges to "Bat Cave" findings belong elsewhere rather than featured in this section
- 04:2204:22, 28 October 2007 diff hist +258 3:10 to Yuma (2007 film) →Plot: proofreading mostly -- add a few minor details for clarity
- 04:0204:02, 28 October 2007 diff hist +27 3:10 to Yuma (1957 film) →Plot: just proofreading
7 October 2007
- 10:5010:50, 7 October 2007 diff hist +4 Master of Arts in Liberal Studies adding in MA -- since some programs grant a general MA in .... (whatever the field is) -- PhD works this way too, so that was added also~~~~
- 10:4810:48, 7 October 2007 diff hist +39 Master of Arts in Liberal Studies fixing my own error w/ degree "initials"
6 October 2007
- 18:1018:10, 6 October 2007 diff hist −932 Popcorn →Health: deleting plagiarized content ~~~~
- 18:0918:09, 6 October 2007 diff hist +548 Talk:Popcorn →Popcorn fumes: new section
11 August 2007
- 21:4921:49, 11 August 2007 diff hist +107 User:SwanSZ No edit summary current
16 May 2007
- 17:0217:02, 16 May 2007 diff hist +174 Rhetoric (Aristotle) →English translation: smoothing the narrative describing the modern English translations~~~~
- 16:3816:38, 16 May 2007 diff hist −57 Rhetoric (Aristotle) →English translation: removing repetition of date of publication ~~~~
- 16:2816:28, 16 May 2007 diff hist +50 Rhetoric (Aristotle) →English translation: amending description of Kennedy; identification of the strengths of a standard translation are important~~~~
- 16:1416:14, 16 May 2007 diff hist +47 Rhetoric (Aristotle) →History and Context: correcting date for Roberts translation; clarifying dialectic/rhetoric link~~~~
- 16:0816:08, 16 May 2007 diff hist −14 Rhetoric (Aristotle) altering paragraphing for clarity ~~~~
- 16:0716:07, 16 May 2007 diff hist +266 Rhetoric (Aristotle) restoring references deleted in a revert , shifting sections for clarity, revisions for factual integrity~~~~
- 15:5415:54, 16 May 2007 diff hist +818 Rhetoric (Aristotle) revision to establish the import of the work in the lead itself ~~~~
- 15:2515:25, 16 May 2007 diff hist −238 Rhetoric (Aristotle) fixing reference to proper references to the work are to "the Rhetoric" or to "Aristotle's Rhetoric"-- never to just "Rhetoric"; clarify rel btwn P & Ar's work to make text factually correct ~~~~
- 15:1015:10, 16 May 2007 diff hist −341 Rhetoric (Aristotle) shifting lead to be more easily readable by a general lay reader (which is the audience of a general encylopedia)--"oratorical"as a term is too limiting in scope and thus not accurate~~~~
- 15:0515:05, 16 May 2007 diff hist +1,274 Talk:Rhetoric (Aristotle) →Source request
15 May 2007
- 23:0223:02, 15 May 2007 diff hist +367 User talk:Anas Salloum Hello and thanks
- 22:5822:58, 15 May 2007 diff hist +5,239 Rhetoric (Aristotle) importing significantly revised discussion with extended documentation--chapter descriptions coming next~~~~
- 22:5022:50, 15 May 2007 diff hist −10 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox No edit summary
- 22:4922:49, 15 May 2007 diff hist +804 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox starting to fill in chapter descriptions~~~~
- 22:3922:39, 15 May 2007 diff hist +209 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox cleaning up references~~~~
- 22:1922:19, 15 May 2007 diff hist +108 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox →English translation: adding in Jebb ref & fixing brackets~~~~
- 22:1722:17, 15 May 2007 diff hist +257 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox →Further reading
- 22:1422:14, 15 May 2007 diff hist −850 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox →Notes
- 22:1322:13, 15 May 2007 diff hist +845 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox →English translation: adding in references to main translations~~~~
- 21:5421:54, 15 May 2007 diff hist +89 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox No edit summary
- 21:3021:30, 15 May 2007 diff hist 0 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox No edit summary
- 21:2721:27, 15 May 2007 diff hist +1,193 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox No edit summary
- 20:1420:14, 15 May 2007 diff hist +5 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox No edit summary
- 20:0720:07, 15 May 2007 diff hist +5,008 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox first restructure of lead paragraph ~~~~
- 17:5217:52, 15 May 2007 diff hist +5,320 User:SwanSZ/Sandbox creating sandbox for Rhetoric dev.
- 17:4917:49, 15 May 2007 diff hist +7 N User:SwanSZ/Sandbox ←Created page with 'sandbox'
- 17:4817:48, 15 May 2007 diff hist +14 User:SwanSZ adding sandbox~~~~
- 17:2817:28, 15 May 2007 diff hist +1,248 Wikipedia:Parenthetical referencing correcting information, especially so that examples match the citation requirements given ~~~~
- 17:0917:09, 15 May 2007 diff hist +1,966 Wikipedia talk:Parenthetical referencing clarifying that info added prior is indeed accurate ~~~~
30 April 2007
- 22:4422:44, 30 April 2007 diff hist +355 Talk:Parenthetical referencing →Page moves, NPV, and accuracy of information: ~~~~
- 22:3722:37, 30 April 2007 diff hist +496 Wikipedia talk:Parenthetical referencing →Swan's changes: ~~~~
- 22:3322:33, 30 April 2007 diff hist +1,602 User talk:SlimVirgin/History 2 deja vu and reverts
29 April 2007
- 21:4621:46, 29 April 2007 diff hist +605 Wikipedia:Parenthetical referencing →Page numbers: adding in a note that quotations require quotation marks and clarifying use of standardized references; delete Harvard Univ. style guide as it does not use Harvard referencing~~~~
- 21:3121:31, 29 April 2007 diff hist +105 Wikipedia:Parenthetical referencing correction of newpaper referencing, based on Curtin Univ "Harvard Referencing" p. 6; correcting duplication of author names in text and parentheses ; ~~~~
- 21:1221:12, 29 April 2007 diff hist +410 Talk:Rhetoric (Aristotle) →Under development: ~~~~
- 21:0921:09, 29 April 2007 diff hist +657 Talk:Rhetoric (Aristotle) →Source request: ~~~~
- 21:0121:01, 29 April 2007 diff hist +5 Rhetoric (Aristotle) →References: adding spacing and correcting name error ~~~~
