User contributions for Sugaki
A user with 273 edits. Account created on 16 May 2007.
31 March 2022
- 13:5913:59, 31 March 2022 diff hist −573 Yuriko Koike →Conservative nationalism: Removed false information; cited source does not back claim either. Koike was not part of the 日本の前途と歴史教育を考える議員の会 or 新しい歴史教科書をつくる会 (Japanese Society for History Textbook Reform). I've searched Japanese sources and found no such information either.
- 13:3513:35, 31 March 2022 diff hist −997 Yuriko Koike →Conservative nationalism: This paragraph has incorrect information; Koike is not part of "みんなで靖国神社に参拝する国会議員の会" nor does any citation exist to that effect, including the link that goes to the Japanese communist party page. JP Wikipedia also makes no mention of such affiliation.
- 13:1413:14, 31 March 2022 diff hist +699 Yuriko Koike →Conservative nationalism: In place of the Forbes contributor, cited the original source (JP). There is no concrete reference that ties Soyokaze with Zaitokukai, hence "purported"--if there is one it needs to be cited.
- 10:4710:47, 31 March 2022 diff hist −714 Yuriko Koike →Conservative nationalism: Deleted the two entries because they both have glaring credibility issues. 1. Forbes did not tie her to Zaikukai, it was a blogger/contributor--not Forbes staff. 2. CNBC did not call her far-right, an analyst guest on Squawkbox did, article even says she's not "explicitly" "far-right." Needs more credible examples.
8 January 2022
- 05:5405:54, 8 January 2022 diff hist +19 BMW M5 →E34 M5 (1988–1995) {{anchor|E34}}: Liters are rounded up so 3.6 liters; numbers under eleven are always spelled out.
- 04:2604:26, 8 January 2022 diff hist +36 User:Sugaki No edit summary
- 04:2604:26, 8 January 2022 diff hist +11 User:Sugaki →Pages I Have Contributed To
- 04:2304:23, 8 January 2022 diff hist +17 m BMW M5 →M-System wheels
- 04:2004:20, 8 January 2022 diff hist +53 BMW M5 →M-System wheels: added details
- 04:0904:09, 8 January 2022 diff hist −68 Yoshitsugu Matsuoka Some more minor tweaks, removed grammar tag as it should be ok.
- 04:0004:00, 8 January 2022 diff hist −45 Yoshitsugu Matsuoka Cleaned up all the grammar.
- 03:3803:38, 8 January 2022 diff hist +58 Assassination of Qasem Soleimani →Trump's motivation for the strike: changing the heading as both are based on anonymous, unverified sources.
16 July 2021
- 06:4206:42, 16 July 2021 diff hist +549 Talk:RMS Lusitania →"Conspiracy Theories"
- 06:3806:38, 16 July 2021 diff hist +12 RMS Lusitania →Conspiracy theories: Incorrect header for section: see Talk.
15 February 2019
- 06:4906:49, 15 February 2019 diff hist +55 BMW M5 →E34 generation (1988–1995) {{anchor|E34}}: Fixed structure so topics don't jump around, fixed typos & grammar, added citation. Changed to past tense for consistency. 1991 wasn't technically a facelift since it visually didn't change. Added minor details.
7 December 2018
- 01:1301:13, 7 December 2018 diff hist +3 Selmer Mark VI citation fix
- 01:0601:06, 7 December 2018 diff hist +32 m Selmer Mark VI fixed citation
- 01:0101:01, 7 December 2018 diff hist +156 Selmer Mark VI Added citation, fixed citation tags, minor cleanup.
6 December 2018
- 10:0310:03, 6 December 2018 diff hist −4 BMW 5 Series (E34) →1994: past tense for consistency
- 10:0210:02, 6 December 2018 diff hist −9 BMW 5 Series (E34) →1993: switch to past tense for consistency
- 09:5909:59, 6 December 2018 diff hist −13 m BMW 5 Series (E34) →1992
- 09:5909:59, 6 December 2018 diff hist +4 BMW 5 Series (E34) →1992: Switched to past tense for consistency.
- 09:5609:56, 6 December 2018 diff hist +2 m BMW 5 Series (E34) →M5 version: spelled out number
- 09:5309:53, 6 December 2018 diff hist −91 Selmer Mark VI Edited grammar, changed from passive tense. A lot of the content has no citation, and needs to be verified by authorities on the subject.
4 December 2018
- 02:2002:20, 4 December 2018 diff hist +3 BMW 5 Series (E34) Spelled out engine cylinder number for consistency, changed 3.5 > 3.6 since that's the common given displacement (displacement is rounded to the nearest tenth).
- 02:1202:12, 4 December 2018 diff hist +33 BMW 5 Series (E34) Undid revision 871759412 by 1292simon (talk) This section is talking about the models globally, which includes North America. Therefore it doesn't make sense to say this is "mid-range" if that wasn't the case in NA. Otherwise the mention of mid or low range should be removed entirely. Also numbers from one to nine are spelled out (refer to the Wikipedia Manual of Style). Tag: Undo
3 December 2018
- 06:1306:13, 3 December 2018 diff hist +82 BMW 5 Series (E34) →540i: Added total production figures, cleaned up copy a bit.
- 06:0606:06, 3 December 2018 diff hist −147 BMW 5 Series (E34) →535i: 3.5 actually being a 3.4 is very common with engine displacement (for example, the E34 being called a 3.6 liter), and top-of-the-line as a regular model for specific years seems overly granular. In cited production document the production shows 97,679 units, so changed accordingly.
- 05:4605:46, 3 December 2018 diff hist +12 BMW 5 Series (E34) →530i: Added production numbers, small grammatical tweaks.
- 05:3905:39, 3 December 2018 diff hist +59 BMW 5 Series (E34) →525iX
- 05:2605:26, 3 December 2018 diff hist +27 BMW 5 Series (E34) →525i: Changed production numbers, the 525i also was not mid-range in NA, but was the base model.
- 05:0805:08, 3 December 2018 diff hist 0 BMW 5 Series (E34) →520i: Corrected production numbers.
- 05:0605:06, 3 December 2018 diff hist +38 BMW 5 Series (E34) →518i: Added production numbers since other models showed them
30 November 2018
- 08:0908:09, 30 November 2018 diff hist −59 BMW 5 Series (E34) →520i: Edit to remove sentence fragment, and improve paragraph flow.
- 07:5807:58, 30 November 2018 diff hist 0 m BMW 5 Series (E34) No edit summary
- 07:5707:57, 30 November 2018 diff hist +3 BMW 5 Series (E34) →518i: Edited for flow, revised sentence fragment.
- 07:5107:51, 30 November 2018 diff hist −71 BMW 5 Series (E34) Further edits for conciseness.
- 07:3807:38, 30 November 2018 diff hist −33 BMW 5 Series (E34) Trimmed and changed from passive tense for the intro.
- 07:3007:30, 30 November 2018 diff hist 0 BMW M5 →E34 M5 (1989–1995){{anchor|E34}}: Some light edits for conciseness and clarity.
- 07:0807:08, 30 November 2018 diff hist −75 Lunar Design Article sounds like a company press release, so I've edited and condensed. Added citation tag since much of its accolades cannot be independently verified. ~~~~
26 July 2018
- 01:1201:12, 26 July 2018 diff hist +13 BMW M5 →E34 M5 (1989–1995){{anchor|E34}}: Some minor edit/adds and trimming, also tweaked paragraph a bit--for cosmetic changes it's not clear whether that's pointing to the South African M5 or the M5 in general.
10 June 2018
- 12:2312:23, 10 June 2018 diff hist +259 Nakajima Ki-84 →Surviving aircraft: Added details about the history
19 April 2018
- 02:1002:10, 19 April 2018 diff hist +435 BMW M5 →E34 M5 (1989–1995){{anchor|E34}}: Added EDC suspension details, some other bits
17 April 2018
- 05:3505:35, 17 April 2018 diff hist −7 m BMW M5 →E34 M5 (1989–1995){{anchor|E34}}: grammar fix
- 02:0002:00, 17 April 2018 diff hist +187 BMW M5 →E34 M5 (1989–1995){{anchor|E34}}: Added citation, extra detail about assembly.
- 01:4501:45, 17 April 2018 diff hist −193 BMW M5 →UK Limited Edition: Sorry wasn't logged in--the blurb doesn't explain differences, but simply says that there are. Alpina is a separate mnfr, and has always been different from M cars, so that it's mentioned only in the E34 section and not the E28, E60, etc. is out of place. Unless their development were tied together, or they're associated then it's better off in the general E34 section. Not against the content, it just doesn't flow with the section or entire page.
11 April 2018
- 04:5004:50, 11 April 2018 diff hist −1 BMW M5 →Motorsport: grammar
- 04:4704:47, 11 April 2018 diff hist −13 BMW M5 →20 Jahre Motorsport Edition: Cleaned up copy, consolidated and clarified.
- 04:4104:41, 11 April 2018 diff hist +4 m BMW M5 →Winkelhock Edition
- 04:4004:40, 11 April 2018 diff hist +8 BMW M5 →Winkelhock Edition: Cleaned up copy, added some additional details.
