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A user with 671 edits. Account created on 23 January 2024.
23 February 2024
- 00:2300:23, 23 February 2024 diff hist +54 Mark Geragos →Notable clients: The pardon was not requested on January 20, 2001. That is when it was granted. The cited source was actually a dead link, but you can see from the archive that Geragos is not mentioned: https://web.archive.org/web/20030206224333/https://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2003/01/25/eveningnews/main537972.shtml The new LA Times source does mention Geragos. Tag: Reverted
- 00:2300:23, 23 February 2024 diff hist +38 Presbyopia See the Treatment section. Surgery, eye drops, and visual training are all discussed, with sources. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
- 00:2300:23, 23 February 2024 diff hist −81 Wikipedia:Guide to addressing bias "try as you might, you'll never prove the author wrong" doesn't make sense as a shorthand here. "side effect" doesn't seem right, and that whole sentence is unneeded. WP:RSP is among the first things you should check when uncertain about a source, so that should definitely be included. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
- 00:2200:22, 23 February 2024 diff hist +597 Wikipedia:Increase your chances Adding nutshell. Removing first-person voice, which is left over from when this was a userspace essay. Fixing bad grammar and awkward phrasing. Improving recently added section on what to do when the citation may not actually support the claim. Better explaining lead sections, which no longer appear above the table of contents. Tweaking the beginning of "How to suggest the change", since it is noted above that it shouldn't always be taken straight to the article talk page. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
- 00:2200:22, 23 February 2024 diff hist −2,073 Wikipedia:Everything you need to know It may be OK to cite something produced by the subject; the point is that independent sources are needed also. Defining "significant viewpoint" first, to avoid confusion about what it means. If a view is too fringe to be mentioned in a broader article, a See Also link likely wouldn't appear there either. Original research is not limited to analysis of *primary* sources. Shortening things that are redundant or too detailed for a summary page. Full sentences. Using name of actual baseball player. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
- 00:2200:22, 23 February 2024 diff hist −15 Opioid epidemic in the United States →History: It was not a rebuttal to the letter itself. The problem was not the letter, but the way it was misrepresented, as explained at Porter and Jick Tag: Reverted
- 00:2200:22, 23 February 2024 diff hist +156 Addiction Rare in Patients Treated with Narcotics Improving article structure, so that "Jane" and "January 10" appear in the body. Better explaining how this letter came about and why such misrepresentations might have later occurred. It's unfair to say that the letter itself "suffered" from anything. The number of citations was compared to that of letters from nine different issues, not just that same issue. Replacing partial quotes, to better reflect the whole of what was said. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
- 00:2200:22, 23 February 2024 diff hist −593 Charles Ingram Moving up trial details so that events are in chronological order. Removing unnecessary and highly subjective phrasing, such as "He was taking brazen risks and playing the game in an unusual manner". Tag: Reverted
22 February 2024
- 22:5722:57, 22 February 2024 diff hist −3 Energy management →Base line of energy assessment: I guess we don't need "etc." if we already say "such as"
- 22:5522:55, 22 February 2024 diff hist −2 Energy management →Base line of energy assessment: Removing extra period. This probably isn't a good way to end a sentence either.
- 22:3522:35, 22 February 2024 diff hist −2 m Rail transport in Great Britain →Built-up area subdivisions
- 22:3022:30, 22 February 2024 diff hist −2 m Railnews No edit summary
- 21:1721:17, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1,856 Steven Avery Details specific to Dassey's case probably don't belong in this article, or at least not in the lead section Tag: Reverted
- 21:0421:04, 22 February 2024 diff hist +1 m SixSixSix No edit summary
- 20:5920:59, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Homelessness in Australia →State Government initiatives
- 20:5820:58, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Josee Wouters No edit summary
- 20:5620:56, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Gold Spot No edit summary
- 20:5120:51, 22 February 2024 diff hist −2 m Gloria Stuart No edit summary
- 20:4420:44, 22 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Opioid →Endogenous opioids
- 20:3920:39, 22 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Dušan Galis No edit summary current
- 20:3720:37, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m AD 666 →Religion current
- 20:3520:35, 22 February 2024 diff hist −5 Number of the beast →Commentary and Discussion: No idea why my edit added this
- 20:3320:33, 22 February 2024 diff hist +3 m Number of the beast →Commentary and Discussion
- 20:2820:28, 22 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Aleksandr Yermakov No edit summary
- 20:2620:26, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Machine-readable document →Definition
- 20:2320:23, 22 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Tedd Josiah →Early life
- 20:2020:20, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 Tokyo Bay Fortress →History
- 20:1520:15, 22 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Representative bureaucracy →History
- 20:1420:14, 22 February 2024 diff hist −6 Representative bureaucracy No edit summary
- 20:1220:12, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Dartmouth Hall →History
- 20:1120:11, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Christian Freeling →Notable games current
- 20:0720:07, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Library of Congress Classification:Class N -- Fine Arts No edit summary current
- 20:0120:01, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Streptomyces isolates →Biotechnology current
- 19:5919:59, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Elena Marchisotto →Writing
- 19:5819:58, 22 February 2024 diff hist −5 m Elena Marchisotto No edit summary
- 19:5419:54, 22 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Pidvolochysk settlement hromada No edit summary current
- 19:4819:48, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Andrej Csemez →Amateur career
- 19:4419:44, 22 February 2024 diff hist −4 m 1985 IAAF World Cross Country Championships No edit summary current
- 19:4119:41, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Chyingtaw No edit summary current
- 19:3819:38, 22 February 2024 diff hist −4 m IFK Eskilstuna No edit summary
- 19:3419:34, 22 February 2024 diff hist −2 m Fusible link No edit summary current
- 19:3219:32, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Ottoman minelayer Intibah →Ottoman period current
- 19:2619:26, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Lucrezia Borgia (opera) →Performance history current
- 19:2219:22, 22 February 2024 diff hist −5 m Umberto Crenca No edit summary current
- 19:1319:13, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Wolfram Meier-Augenstein →Biography current
- 19:0619:06, 22 February 2024 diff hist 0 m OOCL Germany →Construction current
- 19:0219:02, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Kit Swartz →Awards
- 18:1418:14, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Defensive tackle →3-technique tackle
- 18:1318:13, 22 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Jen Sheen No edit summary
- 18:0518:05, 22 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Jakob Maria Mierscheid →Biography current