User contributions for Squish7
A user with 1,188 edits. Account created on 29 July 2008.
8 August 2019
- 23:1923:19, 8 August 2019 diff hist +1 m List of live action role-playing groups pretty sure "LRP" is supposed to be "LARP"
20 December 2018
- 08:4008:40, 20 December 2018 diff hist −1 m Extended reality infinitesimal typo, removed apostrophe before first instance of "XR"; was "('XR)"
4 December 2017
- 05:3405:34, 4 December 2017 diff hist 0 m Wonder Woman I think "role-model" works much better hyphenated in this case. If you're skimming the sentence/paragraph, the words "role" and "model" pop out too much as potentially relevant words to the article, where the sentence isn't using either word
- 05:1105:11, 4 December 2017 diff hist 0 m Wonder Woman typo with-god-like > with god-like
14 August 2017
- 23:5423:54, 14 August 2017 diff hist +793 Talk:Astral plane →Show "Legion" - Marvel Universe or Television?: new section
16 March 2017
- 17:1917:19, 16 March 2017 diff hist +81 m Talk:Ashton Kutcher →Re: Social Media Presence
- 17:1917:19, 16 March 2017 diff hist +735 Talk:Ashton Kutcher →Re: Social Media Presence
- 16:5816:58, 16 March 2017 diff hist −16 Ashton Kutcher The word "unreviewed" isn't balanced or logical. The VV's report *was* a thorough review of a lot of statistics and data. A balanced article needs to respect the opinions of all players, not denounce ANY particular opinion.
8 December 2016
- 02:1002:10, 8 December 2016 diff hist +34 Deflate "lossless" is extremely important to say right away. I thumbed through the article and wasn't even sure it was lossless, I had to google elsewhere to find out.
19 October 2016
- 03:0203:02, 19 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Off-label use I hyphenated 2 instances of "off label" to "off-label" in consistency with the rest of the article. I'm leaving one instance off "off label" in a reference because I assume that's in the official title of the reference/article.
21 September 2016
- 13:4913:49, 21 September 2016 diff hist +1 m ZIP (file format) adding comma after windows makes the sentence much clearer, otherwise it may mean "running on Windows and WinRAR" as in running on both, not WinRAR being the item of a new list
15 September 2016
- 06:3906:39, 15 September 2016 diff hist 0 Green Lantern (film) changing "Great review" to "mixed review", pulling word "mixed" from the article's own summary "An attempt to infuse an earnest piece of comicbook lore with an irreverent, tongue-in-cheek sensibility yields decidedly mixed results in 'Green Lantern.' "
- 06:3606:36, 15 September 2016 diff hist 0 Green Lantern (film) undoing to re-do with proper comment (I accidentially hit enter when typing reason) -- Undid revision 739529338 by Squish7 (talk)
- 06:3406:34, 15 September 2016 diff hist 0 Green Lantern (film) changing "Great review" to "mixed review", based 87/on the tone of the
5 September 2016
3 September 2016
8 August 2016
- 01:3401:34, 8 August 2016 diff hist +1 m Household income in the United States "$72,824 with men" may sound like $72,824 is the male average, making the sentence confusing. I had to read the sentence multiple times to figure it out. A comma after $72,824 helps separate it from the male/female specifications.
1 August 2016
- 11:5411:54, 1 August 2016 diff hist +4 Clock drift made my last correction slightly more clear; added "all"
- 11:5211:52, 1 August 2016 diff hist +50 Clock drift Without my added "i.e." in parentheses, it's grammatically ambiguous whether "these clocks" implies "people holding clocks inside the field" or "clocks inside and outside the field" (both are correct, but the paragraph is trying to make the latter point)
- 10:3910:39, 1 August 2016 diff hist −1 Leap second "26 have been scheduled" sounds like they're all upcoming, ie they know the next 26 leap seconds; this line should make clear these have already happened (so I changed "scheduled" to "inserted"). This line is a bit redundant to the first paragraph anyway.
10 April 2016
- 04:2204:22, 10 April 2016 diff hist +763 Talk:Physical therapy →Posture?: new section
- 04:2204:22, 10 April 2016 diff hist −20 Talk:Physical therapy →Posture
- 04:2204:22, 10 April 2016 diff hist −743 Talk:Physical therapy →Posture?
- 04:2004:20, 10 April 2016 diff hist 0 m Talk:Physical therapy →Posture?
- 04:2004:20, 10 April 2016 diff hist +763 Talk:Physical therapy →Posture?: new section
- 04:1604:16, 10 April 2016 diff hist +30 N Posture correction ←Redirected page to Physical therapy
- 04:0604:06, 10 April 2016 diff hist +30 N Posture therapy ←Redirected page to Physical therapy
- 03:4003:40, 10 April 2016 diff hist −41 m Talk:Poor posture →Article is too negative
- 03:3903:39, 10 April 2016 diff hist +614 Talk:Poor posture →Article is too negative: new section
- 03:1903:19, 10 April 2016 diff hist +1 m Poor posture added missing period
3 April 2016
- 20:4120:41, 3 April 2016 diff hist 0 m Lucid dream →Induction
- 20:4020:40, 3 April 2016 diff hist +18 User talk:Squish7 No edit summary
- 20:3720:37, 3 April 2016 diff hist +4 Lucid dream self-hypnosis should be hyphenated & linked
8 March 2016
- 09:4509:45, 8 March 2016 diff hist −120 Fortune 500 deleted near-duplicate sentence containing "Edgar P. Smith" and moving references after 2nd instance of sentence to end of first, joined remaining loose sentence with first paragraph
1 March 2016
- 03:2803:28, 1 March 2016 diff hist −341 Talk:Monotype Imaging →MyFonts.com appears to be a scam - why is there no information here
- 03:1503:15, 1 March 2016 diff hist +9 Talk:MyFonts →Notability / Site seems to be a scam
- 03:1403:14, 1 March 2016 diff hist −109 m Talk:MyFonts →Notability / Site seems to be a scam
- 03:1003:10, 1 March 2016 diff hist +1,136 Talk:MyFonts No edit summary
- 02:0502:05, 1 March 2016 diff hist +115 m Talk:MyFonts →Notability / Site seems to be a scam
- 02:0102:01, 1 March 2016 diff hist +115 m Talk:Monotype Imaging →MyFonts.com appears to be a scam - why is there no information here
- 01:5001:50, 1 March 2016 diff hist +1,009 Talk:Monotype Imaging →MyFonts.com appears to be a scam - why is there no information here: new section
- 01:2801:28, 1 March 2016 diff hist +11 m Talk:MyFonts →Notability / Site seems to be a scam
- 01:2201:22, 1 March 2016 diff hist +1,443 Talk:MyFonts scam information / appended title of section to accommodate
8 October 2015
- 17:3517:35, 8 October 2015 diff hist −22 m Pixel minor tweak of grammar / "they" was supposed to refer to a noun by original sentence writer, not a person as misinterpreted by someone correcting the sentence, asking "who"?
29 June 2015
- 11:0411:04, 29 June 2015 diff hist −185 Talk:Morocco →Lede needs pruning
- 11:0211:02, 29 June 2015 diff hist +1,607 Talk:Morocco →Lede needs pruning: new section
3 June 2015
- 13:3813:38, 3 June 2015 diff hist 0 m April 2015 Nepal earthquake typo "5,5 million" (comma) > "5.5 million" (period)
26 May 2015
- 00:4700:47, 26 May 2015 diff hist +1,439 Talk:Vevo →lead is too recursive: new section
23 May 2015
- 01:5001:50, 23 May 2015 diff hist +7 Halo (franchise) adding PC
- 01:4801:48, 23 May 2015 diff hist +10 Halo (franchise) The console is buried in the lengthy lead, only mentioned once. "Xbox" is only 4 letters; it's perfect to throw in the first sentence
