User contributions for Slusho815
A user with 402 edits. Account created on 18 March 2009.
11 May 2023
- 22:1622:16, 11 May 2023 diff hist −1 m Lisa Marie (actress) →Filmography: typos
27 March 2023
- 17:4217:42, 27 March 2023 diff hist −4 m Nightmare (1963 The Outer Limits) →Original air date and reception: no need to emphasize
28 January 2023
- 17:5917:59, 28 January 2023 diff hist 0 m Avatar: The Way of Water improper semi-colon use
- 02:2902:29, 28 January 2023 diff hist 0 m Hollidaysburg (film) No edit summary
23 January 2023
- 04:2704:27, 23 January 2023 diff hist −2 Steve Moore (musician) No edit summary
21 January 2023
- 03:2703:27, 21 January 2023 diff hist −17 m Married print informal and extraneous words current
- 03:2103:21, 21 January 2023 diff hist +2 m Wonder Woman 1984 →Controversy: grammar
17 January 2023
- 04:3504:35, 17 January 2023 diff hist +1 m Coraline (film) grammar
29 December 2022
- 04:3804:38, 29 December 2022 diff hist −1 m Masking (personality) typo
1 December 2022
- 04:5004:50, 1 December 2022 diff hist −4 m Jonah Hill filmography duplicate word
13 November 2022
- 03:2903:29, 13 November 2022 diff hist −7 m Paranormal Activity: Next of Kin →Sequel: typo, grammar
10 September 2022
- 01:4901:49, 10 September 2022 diff hist −3 Ketchup →Tomato ketchup: "nowadays" too informal
15 August 2022
6 August 2022
- 03:0403:04, 6 August 2022 diff hist 0 m Luck (2022 film) No edit summary
2 August 2022
- 00:0600:06, 2 August 2022 diff hist 0 m Mystic Braves No edit summary
30 May 2022
- 17:1817:18, 30 May 2022 diff hist −1 m Riddick (film) →Sequel: unnecessary comma
16 May 2022
- 16:1716:17, 16 May 2022 diff hist −96 m The Chronicles of Narnia (film series) →Netflix films and series: was too informal
26 April 2022
- 18:2318:23, 26 April 2022 diff hist +31 Morrissey previous wording was too long and confusing — the previous wording made it sound like Morrissey was critiquing the support of these things, when actually he was supporting them.
23 April 2022
- 19:4819:48, 23 April 2022 diff hist −26 m Jar Jar Binks corrected comma splice and made written voice more consistent with rest of Wikipedia
17 April 2022
- 15:5615:56, 17 April 2022 diff hist +14 m Hop (film) Made more clear
- 14:1114:11, 17 April 2022 diff hist 0 m Breaststroke corrected tense Tag: Manual revert
13 April 2022
- 17:5117:51, 13 April 2022 diff hist −4 m Jennette McCurdy →2019–present: I'm Glad My Mom Died, Empty Inside and memoir: Cleaner without the redundant word
1 April 2022
- 21:2321:23, 1 April 2022 diff hist −11 94th Academy Awards →Will Smith–Chris Rock incident: the two are not mutually exclusive; he fumbled the words, but stayed unusually calm at the same time.
- 19:4719:47, 1 April 2022 diff hist −48 Joseph Kahn videography →Films: Redundant to have a Director column, since he is always the director
- 19:3219:32, 1 April 2022 diff hist −1 m Jennifer Kaytin Robinson Removed hyphen for consistency across Wikipedia; other articles spell it without the hyphen
25 March 2022
- 21:3321:33, 25 March 2022 diff hist +20 List of biggest box-office bombs was too informal
- 21:1621:16, 25 March 2022 diff hist −1 m Psych: The Movie typo
- 20:3820:38, 25 March 2022 diff hist +9 I Am Legend (film) →Sequel: Last paragraph negates this line. So, editing to make it past tense
- 15:0315:03, 25 March 2022 diff hist −4 m Substance 1987 →Songs: removed extra word
24 March 2022
- 20:2120:21, 24 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Amy Seimetz →Career: corrected title
18 March 2022
- 20:4220:42, 18 March 2022 diff hist +1 The Walking Dead (TV series) →Filming: grammar
- 19:5119:51, 18 March 2022 diff hist −65 Shane Acker →Career: Made meaning more clear and grammatically correct. Also removed link for Crusoe, because no page seems to exist.
- 19:2519:25, 18 March 2022 diff hist 0 m Mowgli: Legend of the Jungle →Reception: misspelling
- 18:5418:54, 18 March 2022 diff hist −2 Awkwafina →Cultural appropriation: It can be less confusing to use adjectives in the positive form; using "not" may appear to create a new clause
- 18:4718:47, 18 March 2022 diff hist −1 m List of Welsh films →2000s: removed extra comma
11 March 2022
- 20:3420:34, 11 March 2022 diff hist +31 m Joaquin Phoenix filmography →Film: inserted link to John Callahan — Phoenix portrays Callahan in the film
- 20:3220:32, 11 March 2022 diff hist +1 Joaquin Phoenix filmography →Film: The column is for the role, not the director
- 19:2919:29, 11 March 2022 diff hist −6 m Alex Somers No edit summary
- 19:2919:29, 11 March 2022 diff hist +9 Alex Somers clause should be dependent, but was independent
- 15:2915:29, 11 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Centennial Olympic Park bombing →Conviction of Eric Robert Rudolph: missing comma
10 March 2022
- 20:2920:29, 10 March 2022 diff hist 0 Get a Mac →Synopsis: second clause is not independent, so semi-colon should not be used
3 March 2022
- 15:1115:11, 3 March 2022 diff hist −8 Qubit →Quantum entanglement: The voice of the writer should not come through — meaning is clear without italics
- 15:0915:09, 3 March 2022 diff hist −4 Qubit →Bit versus qubit: Too stylized to use italics; the meaning is clear without
25 February 2022
- 19:2319:23, 25 February 2022 diff hist −27 High Flying Bird →Plot: Repetitive use of "through"
24 February 2022
- 19:0919:09, 24 February 2022 diff hist +13 Luca Guadagnino →Frequent collaborators: Comma at the beginning breaks up the dependent clause; also, there are three films listed. Changed the sentence structure
- 19:0619:06, 24 February 2022 diff hist −26 Cary Joji Fukunaga →Future projects: Redundant; the Hiroshima project is already mentioned at the beginning of the section
22 February 2022
- 04:0204:02, 22 February 2022 diff hist −3 Chicago Seven Saying "represented" sounds like you're talking about legal representation, since this article is about a legal issue.
18 February 2022
- 18:2318:23, 18 February 2022 diff hist +2 m Japanese mon (currency) Made more formal and fixed comma splice
11 February 2022
- 21:2221:22, 11 February 2022 diff hist +17 Polvo made sentence more formal
- 21:2121:21, 11 February 2022 diff hist −16 Edgar Wright →Film: Removed subjective note — it certainly launched a professional career; who is to say whether it is amateur or not?
