User contributions for Shaunak Harmalkar
A user with 9 edits. Account created on 12 July 2023.
16 July 2023
- 06:0406:04, 16 July 2023 diff hist −7 m Pernem taluka In the sentence, "It was taken over, lost and finally regained from the Rajas of Sawantwadi," consider adding a comma after "lost" for better readability: "It was taken over, lost, and finally regained from the Rajas of Sawantwadi." In the sentence, "though the Deshprabhu family, (which to this day owns major lands in Pernem taluka) a state on Goa's northern border that allied sometimes with the Portuguese and sometimes with the Marathas," consider rephrasing the latter part of the sentence for
- 05:5905:59, 16 July 2023 diff hist −122 m Ponda, Goa In the sentence, "Regularly scheduled bus services to Panaji(Panjim), Margao, and Vasco (near Dabolim) depart from the Kadamba Transport Corporation bus stand on the outskirts of the town," consider adding a comma after "Panaji(Panjim)" for better readability: "Regularly scheduled bus services to Panaji (Panjim), Margao, and Vasco (near Dabolim) depart from the Kadamba Transport Corporation bus stand on the outskirts of the town." In the sentence, "There are buses regularly between Ponda and Dh
- 05:5005:50, 16 July 2023 diff hist 0 Mapusa 1)In the sentence, "There are a few colonial era Municipal building on the Altinho hill," it should be "Municipal buildings" instead of "Municipal building" to indicate multiple buildings.
15 July 2023
- 18:4318:43, 15 July 2023 diff hist −177 Willian (footballer, born 1988) The possessive form of "Baggies" should have an apostrophe after the "s" to indicate possession. The correct version should be: "sealing the Baggies' relegation to the EFL Championship." Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:4218:42, 15 July 2023 diff hist +178 m Willian (footballer, born 1988) The possessive form of "Baggies" should have an apostrophe after the "s" to indicate possession. The correct version should be: "sealing the Baggies' relegation to the EFL Championship." Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit