User contributions for SSEA333
A user with 60 edits. Account created on 16 January 2024.
11 May 2024
- 03:5703:57, 11 May 2024 diff hist +312 N User talk:Bsmit24/Damask/SSEA333 Peer Review →Hello!: new section current Tag: New topic
- 03:5603:56, 11 May 2024 diff hist +2,693 N User:Bsmit24/Damask/SSEA333 Peer Review ←Created page with '{{dashboard.wikiedu.org peer review/guide}} ==General info== ;Whose work are you reviewing? Bsmit24 ;Link to draft you're reviewing ;https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bsmit24/Damask?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template ;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) ;Damask == Evaluate the drafted changes == '''STRUCTURE/ORGANIZATION''' * I would make "Nomads"/"China"/"Europe" their own subsections underne...' current Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4802:48, 11 May 2024 diff hist +354 m Maqama fixed formatting issue in lead; adding content in 'shadow play' and 'modern examples in literature' Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4002:40, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1,703 Maqama Revised lead section for balance & to reflect recent changes in content Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3302:33, 11 May 2024 diff hist +985 User:SSEA333/Maqama Finished second (last) paragraph of lead section. Will add citations when I move the paragraph to the live article. current Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2302:23, 11 May 2024 diff hist +93 m User:SSEA333/Maqama No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2002:20, 11 May 2024 diff hist +285 m User:SSEA333/Maqama wrote first sentence of second paragraph of lead. page is getting a bit buggy so i'm saving before firefox crashes Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1802:18, 11 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Maqama added missing diacritics Tag: Visual edit
- 01:3001:30, 11 May 2024 diff hist +10 Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Cleveland State University/Art 353 Art of the Islamic World (Spring 2024) Updating course from dashboard.wikiedu.org Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.3]
- 01:3001:30, 11 May 2024 diff hist +28 Talk:Damask Update Art 353 Art of the Islamic World assignment details current Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.3]
- 01:2201:22, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1,369 User:SSEA333/Maqama Saving first paragraph of revised lead (likely will only have one more paragraph) Tag: Visual edit
10 May 2024
- 23:4623:46, 10 May 2024 diff hist +466 m Maqama Re-added information about the known illustrated manuscripts to the appropriate section. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:4223:42, 10 May 2024 diff hist +23 m Maqama Small edit to 'modern examples' section to specify that it is about literature and has little to do with the illustrated manuscripts. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:4123:41, 10 May 2024 diff hist +2,087 Maqama Added new section on modern examples of works in the literary genre. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:3923:39, 10 May 2024 diff hist +46 Maqama Renamed "Illustrations" to "Illustrated Manuscripts" and reorganized subsequent sections. Renamed "Influences" to "Artistic Influences" for clarity & moved "Shadow Play" underneath "Artistic Influences". Moved existing "Illustrated Manuscripts" section to be a subsection underneath new section of same name and renamed it to "Known Manuscripts" to better reflect the content in that paragraph. Moved "Main article: Maqamat al-Hariri" to top of "Illustrated Manuscripts" section. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1023:10, 10 May 2024 diff hist +7 m Maqama Added missing paragraph break in source editor. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 23:0923:09, 10 May 2024 diff hist +3,025 Maqama Added more general information on narrative structure/form of maqama, as well as another structure proposed by K. Okazaki. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0823:08, 10 May 2024 diff hist −257 Maqama Renamed "Structure" to "Narrative Structure". Revised quote by Anttila and paraphrased block-quote by Alain Qian. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0423:04, 10 May 2024 diff hist +12 Maqama Moved "Etymology", "Development in Hebrew" and "Notable Exponents" underneath "Origins and Development" as separate subsections. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0023:00, 10 May 2024 diff hist −986 Maqama Revised "Origins and Development" regarding al-Hamadhani and his proposed literary predecessors. Hamadhani's inspirations moved to directly after the discussion of the precise origins of the genre, then Ibn Naqiya's and al-Hariri's work afterward; finally, the most common audiences of the maqamat and the fact that illustrated manuscripts were produced. (Any further info on illustrated manuscripts will be moved to a more appropriate section.) Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5022:50, 10 May 2024 diff hist −792 Maqama Renamed "Origins" to "Origins and Development". Removed third paragraph in section (unsourced, not relevant to section and similar info is stated & cited elsewhere in article). Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4522:45, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1,489 Maqama Renamed "Terminology" to "Etymology", as the section is about the historical usage and meaning of one term rather than a list of terms. Removed citation from first sentence of section. Shortened block quote from Amina Shah. Added information/additional interpretations from separate sources. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3022:30, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1,784 User:SSEA333/Maqama re-re-named final section to 'modern applications' since some examples aren't strictly from post-colonial times, and added the written section on it Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2720:27, 10 May 2024 diff hist +33 m User:SSEA333/Maqama Added header to final section on modern examples of maqamat Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2420:24, 10 May 2024 diff hist +7 m User:SSEA333/Maqama Had to add in missing paragraph break in HTML editor Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2320:23, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1 User:SSEA333/Maqama No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2220:22, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1,116 User:SSEA333/Maqama Added final paragraph in "narrative structure" Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5419:54, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1,274 User:SSEA333/Maqama Added paragraph 2 (of 3) to Narrative Structure, which paraphrases the block quote from Qian. I hope using a block quote to separate Anttila's proposed structure is alright -- the next paragraph will have a similarly formatted structure, and I felt something like a flow-chart separate from the text would be easier to understand than plain text or a list. Again, bold text is text that i did NOT change. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3518:35, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1,347 User:SSEA333/Maqama Added first paragraph (of 2-3) to Narrative Structure section. Moved Narrative Structure to be before Origins & Development; after sleeping on it I realized that Origins flows better into the Illustrated Manuscripts section. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3817:38, 10 May 2024 diff hist +37 m User:SSEA333/Maqama made the original/un-changed text bold rather than italic for sake of ease for formatting later Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1217:12, 10 May 2024 diff hist +85 User:SSEA333/Maqama re-added links to origins and development Tag: Visual edit
- 10:1210:12, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1 m User:SSEA333/Maqama added 'citation needed' to origins & development Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 10:1110:11, 10 May 2024 diff hist +596 User:SSEA333/Maqama finished adding citations -- need to go into source editor to add 'citation needed' to one claim (made by a previous editor) Tag: Visual edit
- 10:0510:05, 10 May 2024 diff hist +2,153 User:SSEA333/Maqama Added some citations; will add the rest after saving (have forgotten to save once and lost about 45 minutes of progres... no good) Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5009:50, 10 May 2024 diff hist +3,455 User:SSEA333/Maqama Renamed section to "Origins and Development" since it discusses both before and after the genesis of the genre. Rewrote/re-structured the section. There are some sentences that i did not write but instead relocated to a different part of the section; these sentences will be in italics (since theyre less frequent -- trying to be kind to your eyes). deleting 3rd paragraph (irrelevant to section& uncited & inappropriately informal tone). Will add sources shortly. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:2407:24, 10 May 2024 diff hist −12 m User:SSEA333/Maqama No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 05:4705:47, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1 m User:SSEA333/Maqama No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 05:4605:46, 10 May 2024 diff hist +8 m User:SSEA333/Maqama Added diacritics to names Tag: Visual edit
- 05:4005:40, 10 May 2024 diff hist +3,150 N User:SSEA333/Maqama First revision -- Renamed "Terminology" to "Etymology", as the section is about the historical usage and meaning of one singular word rather than a list of terms. Removed citation from first sentence of section (not necessary to cite that there is scholarly discourse when the scholarly discourse is expanded on within the article). Shortened block quote from Amina Shah. Added information/additional interpretations from separate sources. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5204:52, 10 May 2024 diff hist +52 m User:SSEA333/Maqama/Bibliography updated some sub/section names to more appropriate titles current Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5004:50, 10 May 2024 diff hist −10 m User:SSEA333/Maqama/Bibliography remembered that the word 'tertiary' exists Tag: Visual edit
9 May 2024
- 22:1022:10, 9 May 2024 diff hist +8,042 N User:SSEA333/Maqama/Bibliography Created bibliography of sources I'll be using in my revisions to this article and an outline of changes I'll be making to it Tag: Visual edit
1 April 2024
- 05:1205:12, 1 April 2024 diff hist +512 m User:SSEA333/citing sources added citation current Tag: Visual edit
- 05:1005:10, 1 April 2024 diff hist +569 N User:SSEA333/citing sources automatic post as part of sandbox guided tour
11 February 2024
- 23:2823:28, 11 February 2024 diff hist +452 N User talk:SSEA333/Evaluate an Article →So it turns out this exercise was NOT for the semester-long Wikipedia assignment;: new section current Tag: New topic
- 23:2523:25, 11 February 2024 diff hist +26 m User:SSEA333/Evaluate an Article Fixed formatting errors for readability. current Tag: Visual edit
- 23:2223:22, 11 February 2024 diff hist +9,827 N User:SSEA333/Evaluate an Article Completed assignment to evaluate a Wikipedia page of our choice. If this is the page that I'll be contributing to for the semester, I have my work cut out for me; if the semester-long Wikipedia assignment is something entirely different, I have my work doubly cut out for me, because I don't think I could leave this page the way that it is. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 20:4120:41, 11 February 2024 diff hist +146 User talk:SSEA333/talk page tutorial reply to Sage current
- 20:4020:40, 11 February 2024 diff hist +240 User talk:SSEA333/talk page tutorial automatic post as part of sandbox guided tour
- 20:3920:39, 11 February 2024 diff hist +339 N User talk:SSEA333/talk page tutorial automatic post as part of sandbox guided tour