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A user with 31 edits. Account created on 19 November 2019.
18 July 2020
- 12:2312:23, 18 July 2020 diff hist −1 Justine Greening →Sitting as an independent: better writing
- 12:2312:23, 18 July 2020 diff hist +18 Justine Greening →Sitting as an independent: removed scare quotes, added relevant link
- 12:2212:22, 18 July 2020 diff hist −13 Whip (politics) non-English speaker evidently wrote this. in the UK at least, nobody ever said "withdrawn from the whip", and the word is "expelling", not "expulsing"
- 12:1912:19, 18 July 2020 diff hist −3 Whip (politics) →In popular culture: grammar fix
- 12:1812:18, 18 July 2020 diff hist −322 Whip (politics) →In popular culture: removed, doesn't really make any sense
- 12:1812:18, 18 July 2020 diff hist −16 Whip (politics) →In popular culture: improved writing
- 12:1712:17, 18 July 2020 diff hist −24 Whip (politics) →In popular culture: improved writing
17 July 2020
- 15:2515:25, 17 July 2020 diff hist −15 m E-mu Emulator →Products
- 15:2415:24, 17 July 2020 diff hist −20 E-mu Emulator No edit summary
- 11:0611:06, 17 July 2020 diff hist −21 Bastei No edit summary
- 11:0311:03, 17 July 2020 diff hist 0 Henry Surtees →Death: "but" makes no sense there
- 11:0311:03, 17 July 2020 diff hist +91 Harald Ertl lead section should mention his death
- 11:0011:00, 17 July 2020 diff hist −244 Hesketh Racing general writing improvements
- 10:5510:55, 17 July 2020 diff hist −2 m Chelsea Pensioner No edit summary
- 10:5410:54, 17 July 2020 diff hist +16 Royal Hospital Chelsea No edit summary
- 10:5210:52, 17 July 2020 diff hist 0 Balamuthia mandrillaris →Organ transplantation: do not use undefined acronyms
- 10:5010:50, 17 July 2020 diff hist −13 Balamuthia mandrillaris No edit summary
- 10:5010:50, 17 July 2020 diff hist 0 Balamuthia mandrillaris this is the normal word order
- 10:4910:49, 17 July 2020 diff hist +23 Naegleriasis →Prognosis: sentence had been tacked on the end without any attempt to form a coherent paragraph as a result. Rewrote.
- 10:4410:44, 17 July 2020 diff hist −15 Case fatality rate →See also: The short description adds nothing
- 10:4310:43, 17 July 2020 diff hist +46 N User:Pretty basic/sandbox ←Created page with '{{User sandbox}} <!-- EDIT BELOW THIS LINE -->' current
- 10:4310:43, 17 July 2020 diff hist 0 N User talk:Pretty basic ←Created blank page
- 10:4310:43, 17 July 2020 diff hist +20 N User:Pretty basic ←Created page with 'Just another editor.' current
- 10:4210:42, 17 July 2020 diff hist −7 List of human disease case fatality rates First sentence was also redundant with the article title. No need to introduce a list by saying "this is a list", it's already clear
- 10:4110:41, 17 July 2020 diff hist +19 List of human disease case fatality rates This short description is redundant with the article title but at least is not so completely blandly uninformative as the previous
- 10:3110:31, 17 July 2020 diff hist +24 Case fatality rate →Real-world examples: acronyms should be defined; square brackets were weird and unnecessary
- 10:3010:30, 17 July 2020 diff hist −25 Case fatality rate →Real-world examples: the range is from zero to 100%.
- 10:2910:29, 17 July 2020 diff hist −39 Case fatality rate →Real-world examples: removed infantile writing
- 10:2810:28, 17 July 2020 diff hist +105 Case fatality rate →Example calculation: Wrote in the conditional tense required by the concept of an example; added sentence illustrating why CFR estimates may go down
- 10:2510:25, 17 July 2020 diff hist −200 Case fatality rate →Terminology: removed prescriptivism
- 10:1610:16, 17 July 2020 diff hist −16 Dian Fossey No need for emotive language