User contributions for PhalanxDown
A user with 88 edits. Account created on 17 March 2021.
11 May 2024
- 14:4814:48, 11 May 2024 diff hist −15 Scriptio continua →Chinese language: Replaced full-character spaces with English's half-character spaces to better approximate the effect for English speakers; the former spacing was to great and it was difficult to perceive the words as a whole sentence.. current
22 March 2024
- 13:5413:54, 22 March 2024 diff hist −690 Convection →Mechanisms: I reworded the natural convection section, and removed a seemingly irrelavant "buoyancy" explanation for brevity and clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
11 August 2023
- 16:1516:15, 11 August 2023 diff hist +17 Baby talk →Vocabulary and structure: linked "elongated vowels" to vowel length article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
26 July 2023
- 16:1716:17, 26 July 2023 diff hist −21 Moralism →North America: Shortened sentence for brevity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
21 June 2023
- 13:5313:53, 21 June 2023 diff hist −6 Great ape language →Use of sign language: Reworded first sentence for brevity
- 13:5113:51, 21 June 2023 diff hist +1 Great ape language →Plastic tokens: Removed reference to "linguistic" streams (since I removed definition in a previous message). If reference is still desired, please create a "Stream (linguistics)" page and link to it here.
- 13:4713:47, 21 June 2023 diff hist −5 Great ape language →Use of sign language: Decapitalized "S" in "Sign language", since no specific sign language was intended. Shortend second paragraph first sentence for clarity and brevity
- 13:4413:44, 21 June 2023 diff hist −46 Great ape language →Use of sign language: Shortened third paragraph's first sentence for brevity and clarity.
- 13:4213:42, 21 June 2023 diff hist −185 Great ape language →Apes that demonstrate understanding: Added punctuation in second paragraph, removed a sentence due for brevity and flow, rephrased last two sentences for clarity. Significantly changed first sentence for clarity and brevity.
- 13:2513:25, 21 June 2023 diff hist +6 m Great ape language →Use of sign language: Fixed reference I broke
- 13:2413:24, 21 June 2023 diff hist −19 Great ape language →Use of sign language: Shortened for clarity and brevity
- 03:0103:01, 21 June 2023 diff hist −2 Plot (narrative) →Definition: Clarified distinction between "fabula" and "syuzhet" as the distinction between chronology/sequence-of-events and plot-threads
8 June 2023
- 15:2215:22, 8 June 2023 diff hist −174 Japanese language Reworded third paragraph for brevity. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 April 2023
- 13:1913:19, 26 April 2023 diff hist −7 Combat stress reaction changed individually to personally for clarity, omitted own for brevity, removed plural s in experiences for clarity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:1713:17, 26 April 2023 diff hist −152 Combat stress reaction Shortened sentence for brevity and clarity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 January 2023
- 18:2818:28, 31 January 2023 diff hist +41 Demonstrative Link 10. Was about that language's inflectional structure, and made no mention or listing of the alleged 29 way distinction. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 January 2023
- 03:3203:32, 17 January 2023 diff hist +17 Fukuwarai Linked to alternative name for "okame" as "otafuku" Tag: Visual edit
30 November 2022
- 20:2020:20, 30 November 2022 diff hist +2,206 Talk:Mustafa Kemal Atatürk Undid revision 1124065197 by Lowercase sigmabot III (talk) I undid changes by sigma bot, since neither issue has been resolved. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 20:1520:15, 30 November 2022 diff hist +139 Talk:Mustafa Kemal Atatürk →Infobox image: Reply Tag: Reply
17 October 2022
- 08:4708:47, 17 October 2022 diff hist −121 Masonry Removed sentence on fire classes, since fire class describes the kind of extinguisher necessary to put out a fire, not a fire-proofing grade. If the original author meant a building grade, they may clarify using a specific grade, preferably hyperlinked to the standard and cited. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 September 2022
- 19:4619:46, 15 September 2022 diff hist −40 Bonobo →Peacefulness: A whole paragraph was a direct quote from the source- not original wording. I put the whole thing in quotation-marks, to make clear this belongs to a non-wikipedian author Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4601:46, 15 September 2022 diff hist −38 Spermatocele Picture not clear (I at first thought it was someone obstructing a space-themed background), also placed without context. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:3101:31, 15 September 2022 diff hist +1 Scrotum Replaced "streamlined" with fusiform Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:2901:29, 15 September 2022 diff hist 0 Fusiform →See also: Fixed erroneous capital "A" in "also" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:2801:28, 15 September 2022 diff hist +181 Fusiform Added See Also section with "streamliner" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 August 2022
- 22:5622:56, 9 August 2022 diff hist +382 m Talk:Sri Lanka →Incorrect grammar?: Had accidently submitted my comment too early- I added the rest.
- 22:5322:53, 9 August 2022 diff hist +528 Talk:Sri Lanka →Incorrect grammar?: new section Tag: New topic
7 August 2022
- 20:0420:04, 7 August 2022 diff hist −4 Mustafa Kemal Atatürk →Personal life: removed intensifier-usage adverb "certainly" for brevity, and replaced "he" with "Atatürk" for clarity Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0020:00, 7 August 2022 diff hist −4 m Talk:Mustafa Kemal Atatürk →Legacy Section lacks Criticism and Consequences of Ataturk, Reads like a Hagiography: Removed prior interpretation, as incorrect.
- 19:5719:57, 7 August 2022 diff hist +1,131 Talk:Mustafa Kemal Atatürk →Legacy Section lacks Criticism and Consequences of Ataturk, Reads like a Hagiography: new section Tag: New topic
5 August 2022
- 05:2105:21, 5 August 2022 diff hist −73 Talk:Symbolic programming →How is this different than the "Homoiconicity" and "Metaprogramming" Pages
12 July 2022
- 22:4522:45, 12 July 2022 diff hist +41 Naturalistic planned language Added Language Planning article link in a See Also section Tag: Visual edit
1 June 2022
- 21:4721:47, 1 June 2022 diff hist −1 Bay Reworded introductory "fjord" sentence for clarity and flow Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4621:46, 1 June 2022 diff hist +9 Bay Clarified "steep" in introductory paragraph Tag: Visual edit
- 21:3721:37, 1 June 2022 diff hist +3 Bay Reworded definition of "fjord" introductory paragraph, to make clear that it is the formation that defined a fjord, not the consequential steepness of the surrounding land, that makes it so. Tag: Visual edit
14 May 2022
- 21:1621:16, 14 May 2022 diff hist −858 Chemical nomenclature →Aims of chemical nomenclature: Rewrote portions for brevity and clarity, also modified parts of the section after Tag: Visual edit
- 06:3006:30, 14 May 2022 diff hist +196 Hydride →Types of hydrides: Added Protides and Tritides as sections of there own right, as Deuterides are given their own section. Tag: Visual edit
18 March 2022
- 18:3518:35, 18 March 2022 diff hist −10 Indian English Removed "elsewhere", as "diaspora" inherently means elsewhere. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3418:34, 18 March 2022 diff hist −14 Indian English Modified the wording of the first sentence for less formality. Modified other sentences in first paragraph for clarity and brevity. Tag: Visual edit
22 February 2022
- 17:2617:26, 22 February 2022 diff hist −179 Universum (magazine) Removed website-link, since linked to a word-press blog which was not the Austrian Popular Science Article Tag: Visual edit
17 January 2022
- 15:1915:19, 17 January 2022 diff hist −1,516 Causal model Removed paragraph that did not directly address the subject of causal models. It appears to have been an abstract of a paper, though it was not clear what relevancy, other than counterfactuality briefly and indirectly mentioned, the paragraph had. Additionally, it used first-person pronouns outside of quotations inappropriate for encyclopedic tone of voice. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 January 2022
- 20:4220:42, 13 January 2022 diff hist 0 Chinese painting →Paradigm Shift in Chinese Landscape Representation: Corrected "extent" to "extend", as a verb was required for the sentence written. Tag: Visual edit
3 January 2022
- 16:3816:38, 3 January 2022 diff hist −4 Power supply Changed "primary function" to "main purpose" for brevity and simplicity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 November 2021
- 01:1601:16, 18 November 2021 diff hist +72 Oxidation state Reworded introductory paragraph for clarity, and replacing "100%" with "fully" to aid Innumerates (those who are not good at numbers). Tag: Visual edit
- 01:0801:08, 18 November 2021 diff hist −60 Oxidation state Reworded paragraph for brevity Tag: Visual edit
- 01:0101:01, 18 November 2021 diff hist −7 Oxidation state Omitted "-ly true" from "never exactly true" for brevity. Tag: Visual edit
27 October 2021
- 16:5816:58, 27 October 2021 diff hist +2 m Hetappi Manga Kenkyūjo Fixed grammatical error: from noun "logic" to adjective "logical" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 October 2021
- 22:3322:33, 16 October 2021 diff hist +133 Numeral (linguistics) →Identifying numerals: Added link to new "Collective numbers" section of "English Numerals" Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2622:26, 16 October 2021 diff hist +595 English numerals Added "Collective numbers" section, and made note that "multiplicative numbers" are also called "adverbial numbers" under the "Multiplicative adverbs and adjectives" section Tag: Visual edit
15 October 2021
- 19:0219:02, 15 October 2021 diff hist −5 Numeral (linguistics) Undid revision 1050094696 by PhalanxDown (talk). Turns out English grammer calls adverbial numerals "Multiplicative numerals". I am reverting my change thusly. Tag: Undo
