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6 January 2021

  • 16:1516:15, 6 January 2021 diff hist −9 Sasha Anawalt Early life: Removed additional unnecessary text from previous edit
  • 16:1516:15, 6 January 2021 diff hist +388 Sasha Anawalt Early life: Made previous argument that inclusion about William Anawalt was superfluous, particularly since he may have created the article (WANAWALT created it). Was told that not every piece of information included has to be notable, but just that it is true. Since William Anawalt is the owner of a well-known local business, true, verifiable information about him and said business is appropriate to include, particularly since there is nothing much else there about him presently.
  • 14:0614:06, 6 January 2021 diff hist +413 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted citation for claim that book took six years to write.
  • 14:0014:00, 6 January 2021 diff hist −12 Sasha Anawalt Career: Removed instance of stray text, "In comments," from last paragraph.
  • 13:5813:58, 6 January 2021 diff hist +154 Sasha Anawalt Removed stray comma after journalist in opening paragraph, adjusted text/added additional info on a previous "citation needed."
  • 13:5213:52, 6 January 2021 diff hist +164 Sasha Anawalt Career: Further elaborated on her resignation from council with true, additional, verifiable details from cited NY Times report about said event.
  • 13:4213:42, 6 January 2021 diff hist −14 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted text from Getty Arts Journalism program to remove international. New citation that was added provides no additional information or further verification that the journalists who participated were "international."
  • 13:3613:36, 6 January 2021 diff hist −1 Sasha Anawalt Career: Removed period at the end of The New York Times
  • 13:3413:34, 6 January 2021 diff hist +1 Sasha Anawalt Updated intro paragraph as it can be confirmed that she is currently an educator, although there are still questions about her professional journalistic work. It makes sense to highlight what is verifiable first and then what there are still questions on after.
  • 13:3213:32, 6 January 2021 diff hist +174 Sasha Anawalt Career: Added needed citation tag, Need to confirm with outlets themselves if she held official job titles as to further update this section to best inform readers.
  • 13:3013:30, 6 January 2021 diff hist −35 Sasha Anawalt Career: Similar to previous edits that I made, the previous word "numerous' suggests that Anawalt wrote distinct articles about television, dance, and theatre for multiple outlets, which may not be the case. There is true, verifiable information here that she wrote about said topics for outlets including NYT, LA Weekly, and KCRW, but not necessarily others, so I've adjusted text to better reflect that. If more true, verifiable information is available, it is more than welcome to be added.
  • 13:1913:19, 6 January 2021 diff hist +609 Sasha Anawalt Updated text and added citation needed tag with supporting argument as to why citation is needed.
  • 13:1113:11, 6 January 2021 diff hist −5 Sasha Anawalt Career: There are issues with the new KCRW citation provided by DiamondRenley 39. The new included citation links to a search page for Anawalt's work on KCRW, although there are items on said page not attributed to her. DiamondRenley criticized me for including a similar link earlier. More so, saying that she "served as dance critic" implies this was an official title/job, which may not be the case, KCRW needs to verify. What we can only say for now is that she wrote about dance for KCRW.
  • 06:1906:19, 6 January 2021 diff hist +338 Sasha Anawalt Added an additional area where citation is needed and where text may need to be adjusted if no citation can be provided.
  • 06:1206:12, 6 January 2021 diff hist −14 Sasha Anawalt Career: Upon reviewing the LA Weekly link more closely, Anawalt may not have written for the publication during the time period described (1997 to 1999). Have removed it as present information suggests information is not true. If additional info is available that verifies she worked there or had pieces published from in 1997, as well as more articles than the one published in 1998, the (1997-1999) information can be added again.
  • 06:0606:06, 6 January 2021 diff hist +277 Sasha Anawalt Made a few adjustments to areas where citations are needed requesting links to full body of work, as well as added a citation after text that states she wrote about dance for numerous publications.
  • 06:0206:02, 6 January 2021 diff hist −409 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted previous edit which had broken code for citation.
  • 05:5905:59, 6 January 2021 diff hist +153 Sasha Anawalt Adjusted citation for LA Weekly work, replaced previous citations with a new citation to a link that acts as a more comprehensive overview of her L.A. Weekly work available online. Links to articles in previous citations can still be accessed through this new link.
  • 05:4805:48, 6 January 2021 diff hist +171 Sasha Anawalt Added areas where citation is needed in response to concerns over previous edits.
  • 05:0705:07, 6 January 2021 diff hist +16,029 Talk:Sasha Anawalt Addressed initial comments by DiamondRemley
  • 02:4702:47, 6 January 2021 diff hist +11,305 Talk:Sasha Anawalt No edit summary

5 January 2021

  • 22:0122:01, 5 January 2021 diff hist −31 Sasha Anawalt Updated once again due to vandalism concerns from Peaceful Exist Tag: Reverted
  • 21:5521:55, 5 January 2021 diff hist −13 Sasha Anawalt Career: Removed "Sro23 smells" text from page due to vandalism concerns. Tag: Reverted
  • 21:5321:53, 5 January 2021 diff hist +21 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted text to reflect frequency of her journalistic work. Available archives indicate that she wrote from time to time, but It is unclear if she was ever on staff or a full-time writer for these publications, let alone anywhere. She contributed more than one piece for each but still not a highly substantial amount. Updated text better reflects that.
  • 21:4421:44, 5 January 2021 diff hist −288 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted book mention to remove portion regarding how long it took to write the book. Unless the book itself is particularly notable (it received praise from critics and inspired the PBS documentary but has not been discussed much in the years since), the mention about the amount of time it took to write said book is superfluous.
  • 21:3621:36, 5 January 2021 diff hist 0 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted citation for KCRW so reference comes after the sentence's closing period.
  • 21:3521:35, 5 January 2021 diff hist −10 Sasha Anawalt Career: Removed numerous as it is implied with the inclusion/citation of multiple publications.
  • 21:3421:34, 5 January 2021 diff hist −358 Sasha Anawalt Career: Cleaned up career section a bit further to provide links/citations to her available work with said outlets online.
  • 21:2621:26, 5 January 2021 diff hist −164 Sasha Anawalt Early life: Removed information about schools as it is unnecessary to know where she went to high school and college, unless there was anything particularly notable regarding her time at said schools.
  • 21:2321:23, 5 January 2021 diff hist −492 Sasha Anawalt Career: Removed Pulitzer notation due to lack of notability or necessity for the page. Winning a Pulitzer is itself notable, but serving on the jury panel is not, unless there was anything uniquely notable about the 2006 or 2007 pulitzers or their juries for both years. If so, that information should be included. As for how the page presently exists, the inclusion of the Pulitzer jury information could be superfluous and biased (see previous concerns regarding notability and WANAWALT).
  • 21:1421:14, 5 January 2021 diff hist −420 Sasha Anawalt Removed citation for Anawalt's resignation from the Arts and Culture Commission in Pasadena. Even though publications wrote about the resignation, more info needs to be provided regarding her time on the council and if it was notable, or if the resignation itself had a long-lasting impact. There are no previous mentions of it on her page and it appears to be superfluous. It's initial inclusion may have also been biased (page was initially created by WANAWALT, who may be Anawalt's husband).
  • 20:5420:54, 5 January 2021 diff hist +14 Sasha Anawalt Career: Added contributor for LA Weekly mention. Similar to KCRW, available archives indicate Anawalt only wrote for LA Weekly from time to time: https://www.laweekly.com/?s=sasha+anawalt
  • 20:5020:50, 5 January 2021 diff hist −255 Sasha Anawalt Career: Removed information about SoHo Weekly News, Montreal Gazette and The Weekly, due to lack of citation and how it is already implied in the next paragraph that she wrote for many publications. There is also nothing provided that indicates that the "The Weekly" publication is notable.
  • 20:4720:47, 5 January 2021 diff hist +15 Sasha Anawalt Career: Added "as a contributing" in front of KCRW, available archives indicate that she was not on staff and that she only contributed pieces from time to time: https://www.kcrw.com/@@search?q=sasha%20anawalt
  • 20:3920:39, 5 January 2021 diff hist −247 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted again to remove citation for New York Times mention as code was broken, it can be added again if necessary although a brief Google search does verify the book received a positive review from the NYT.
  • 20:3720:37, 5 January 2021 diff hist −1 Sasha Anawalt Career: Adjusted broken citation code for NYT mention
  • 20:3420:34, 5 January 2021 diff hist −1,582 Sasha Anawalt Career: The inclusion of multiple quotes from reviews of the Joffrey book may be making it more notable and acclaimed than it actually is, there has not been much discussion about said book in the years since its release. Adjusted text and citations.
  • 20:1720:17, 5 January 2021 diff hist −238 Sasha Anawalt Removed mention about her marrying William Anawalt, cited link is just to the Wikipedia page for the New York Times, and information itself is unnotable. Removed mention of moving to CA as it is unverified and unnotable. Added "as a contributor" as it doesn't appear she was ever on staff according to available archives.
  • 20:0920:09, 5 January 2021 diff hist −816 m Sasha Anawalt Edited intro, page indicates she is notable for her Joffrey book, although it assumes her academic programs are notable with no supporting data/citations provided. Adjusted the KCRW mention as it is unclear if she contributed for as long of a period as described, if she was on staff, or an occasional contributor. Adjusted USC mention as there is no data provided to support idea her programs are notable, current citation to MediaBistro page is broken. Removed awards due to lack of citation.
  • 19:5219:52, 5 January 2021 diff hist −185 Sasha Anawalt Edited intro, the page clearly indicates that Anawalt is notable for her writing of the Joffrey book, although it makes the assumption that the academic programs she created are therefore notable.

21 December 2020

14 December 2020