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12:1612:16, 24 May 2024 diff hist +100‎ m Dark Souls II ‎ A less concise, but much more clear explanation of the health bar system in the game, vis-a-vis death and hollowing. Tag: Visual edit

10:3310:33, 7 May 2024 diff hist +23‎ m StarCraft (video game) ‎ Campaign is more precise than "game" in this context. The edits in the latter half of the sentence improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
10:1110:11, 7 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ m StarCraft (video game) ‎ added a helpful hyperlink Tag: Visual edit
10:0410:04, 7 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ m StarCraft (video game) ‎ Correcting subject-verb agreement Tag: Visual edit
09:4209:42, 7 May 2024 diff hist +3‎ m StarCraft (video game) ‎ The claim being made applies only to Starcraft II, not all starcraft iterations, so adding "II" makes sense. However, doing so also brings into question the sentence's relevance at this point in the article. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
04:1904:19, 7 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Dark Souls II ‎ Modifying the list of three items: A, B, [and] C. Tag: Visual edit
04:1704:17, 7 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Dark Souls II ‎ Correcting subject-verb agreement Tag: Visual edit
04:1404:14, 7 May 2024 diff hist +109‎ m Dark Souls II ‎ A somewhat clunky edit that resolves two issues in a single sentence: 1. It resolves the vagueness/over-generality of "it" in the phrasing "it fared poorly" ; 2. It explains to newcomers how the second iteration in a series (i.e. Dark Souls II) could 'fare' poorly in comparison more than one previous game. Tag: Visual edit

02:4702:47, 26 April 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Dark Souls (video game) ‎ Correction of verb tense to reflect the passage of time since the sentence was written. Tag: Visual edit
02:3902:39, 26 April 2024 diff hist +116‎ m Dark Souls (video game) ‎ This sentence matches the surrounding sentences by listing the weapons made available for ranged attacks. Tag: Visual edit
02:3002:30, 26 April 2024 diff hist +16‎ m Dark Souls (video game) ‎ added "ranged attacks" to the list of features present in the description of the game's combat. Tag: Visual edit

02:0702:07, 24 April 2024 diff hist −8‎ m Dark Souls II ‎ grammatical change to a sentence that could use a reference. There is still a conceptual issue with the sentence because it seems incoherent to say that "boss quality, combat mechanics, and increased difficulty...fared poorly." Tag: Visual edit