User contributions for Moisejp
A user with 17,156 edits. Account created on 27 November 2006.
17 May 2024
- 15:0015:00, 17 May 2024 diff hist +9 Born in the U.S.A. c/e
- 14:5514:55, 17 May 2024 diff hist +6 Born in the U.S.A. →Retrospective reviews: c/e
15 May 2024
- 02:0102:01, 15 May 2024 diff hist +628 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: re publishing now, probably fine current
13 May 2024
- 21:4721:47, 13 May 2024 diff hist +204 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: time zone
- 21:4421:44, 13 May 2024 diff hist +259 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: when's my last day to do copy-editing? :-)
- 21:4021:40, 13 May 2024 diff hist −102 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side two: I'd argue the saxophone part 2/3 through "Darlington County" is a solo (separate from the longer part at the "sha-la-la" end of the song, which I'd argue is not)
- 21:3721:37, 13 May 2024 diff hist +243 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: Nebraska's commercial performance
- 21:3521:35, 13 May 2024 diff hist +523 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: re. release date
- 21:3021:30, 13 May 2024 diff hist +97 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: yes
- 21:3021:30, 13 May 2024 diff hist +294 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: re. lead
- 03:2103:21, 13 May 2024 diff hist +4 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Music and lyrics: I suggest this order of the details (or possibly switch Consequence and humour ones). Need to polish the flow between the sentences but I have to run and won't have time in this sitting
- 03:1503:15, 13 May 2024 diff hist −238 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Music and lyrics: would suggest removing this point unless there are more details about it to give it more context
- 03:0903:09, 13 May 2024 diff hist +592 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: lead, etc.
- 01:4501:45, 13 May 2024 diff hist +29 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final sessions, mixing, and mastering: my edit may not be good, and I'm not sure if it's what M & G say, but I think "original group of songs" may not be clear and requires some tweaking
- 01:3501:35, 13 May 2024 diff hist +6 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: better? (unless the new recordings were completely revamped versions?)
- 01:2601:26, 13 May 2024 diff hist +4 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. oops, correcting last edit
- 01:2301:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist +114 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: addition
- 01:2001:20, 13 May 2024 diff hist −11 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: suggestion because we use the word "recording" quite a lot, here's one spot we could replace it
- 01:1701:17, 13 May 2024 diff hist +42 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: if the sources you've used say this, I think it sounds a little clearer (I know Marsh does say this)
- 01:1301:13, 13 May 2024 diff hist +13 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: I'm not 100% sure, but my impression from what I've read is that part of the reason he recorded the BITUSA songs in May (even though they weren't part of his Nebraska vision) is that he still had some studio time in May that he'd already booked
- 01:0601:06, 13 May 2024 diff hist +10 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: not sure if "ultimately unmade" is the best phrase, but I think just "proposed" is not clear enough, and readers may wonder (I'm assuming it was unmade from looking at Schrader's filmography)
11 May 2024
- 05:4305:43, 11 May 2024 diff hist −178 Dinara Drukarova →Life and career: Seems out of date current
- 04:1404:14, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: one more for now (will catch more of these later)
- 04:1304:13, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: oops, my mistaken formatting
- 04:1004:10, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: here as well
- 04:0904:09, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: here too
- 04:0804:08, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: ref order
- 04:0704:07, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final sessions, mixing, and mastering: ref order
- 04:0404:04, 11 May 2024 diff hist +73 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: May 1982 version of "Cover Me"
- 02:4702:47, 11 May 2024 diff hist −58 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. there seemed to be repeated refs here, unless you wanted to repeat them in the footnote and out (if so, please revert) Tag: Reverted
- 02:3302:33, 11 May 2024 diff hist +9 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: added "Released"
- 02:2902:29, 11 May 2024 diff hist +25 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: precision
10 May 2024
- 15:4115:41, 10 May 2024 diff hist −550 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: tentatively removing table for now per my proposal in the Talk
- 02:3402:34, 10 May 2024 diff hist −285 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Artwork: I agree, let's ditch this for the GA version; if we want to come back to this for the FAC version we may want to think about how to better clarify the "radical politics" comment
9 May 2024
- 03:4203:42, 9 May 2024 diff hist −122 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side two: Maybe we can add more details to this to compensate for the ones I've removed; have no idea where in the lyrics the road trip is supposed to be; the other details I removed also seem not clear or not quite right
- 03:3603:36, 9 May 2024 diff hist +851 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: re. outtakes
- 03:1703:17, 9 May 2024 diff hist +4 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: typo
- 03:0803:08, 9 May 2024 diff hist +16 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final sessions, mixing, and mastering: because "This Hard Land" was ultimately not included
- 03:0503:05, 9 May 2024 diff hist −250 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: Tentatively remove for now? Plotkin's own version of this (in Marsh) is quite different. Maybe for the GA version we can hold back from getting into this, but see if we want to come back to it for the eventual FAC
- 02:5502:55, 9 May 2024 diff hist +1 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: typo
- 02:5402:54, 9 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: ref order
- 02:5002:50, 9 May 2024 diff hist −37 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Nebraska and initial sessions: tentatively removing this detail for now--not clear what it's supposed to imply
- 02:4702:47, 9 May 2024 diff hist 0 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Nebraska and initial sessions: mid-sentence t
- 02:4102:41, 9 May 2024 diff hist −2 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: Zmbro, I know two periods is probably technically correct but it just looks so awkward; if you feel strongly these should be reverted, we can. Hmm, another solution might be to work all references to BITUSA so that they never come at the end of a sentence
- 02:3502:35, 9 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: mid-sentence t
- 02:3402:34, 9 May 2024 diff hist −27 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. lead para one more c/e
- 02:2802:28, 9 May 2024 diff hist +16 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. lead c/e
- 02:2302:23, 9 May 2024 diff hist −11 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. c/e: first pass at lead
- 02:1102:11, 9 May 2024 diff hist −4 The Breeders Tour 2014 →Performances and reception: Seems "No Aloha" article was since merged current
8 May 2024
- 21:2721:27, 8 May 2024 diff hist +243 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: reply