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  • 02:1702:17, 4 August 2019 diff hist −194 Killing of Eric Garnerprovided good source for 15 second neckhold. In addition to the reliable source, it is easily verifiable by any wikipedia editor that he was held by the neck and for less than 16 seconds, The timing is very important because many people mistakenly believe Garner was just choked till he died and don't realize how brief it was. Removed unnecessary comments in article source as such comments should be in talk unless there is a problem with many editors repeatedly making a change.
  • 01:3101:31, 4 August 2019 diff hist +644 Talk:Killing of Eric Garner→‎Cause of death: asthma very important
  • 00:3900:39, 4 August 2019 diff hist −23 Killing of Eric GarnerRestored lede with updated cause of death. Mind the three revert rule 3RR and discuss in talk if you like before changing this again please.
  • 00:3500:35, 4 August 2019 diff hist +32 Killing of Eric GarnerUpdated asthma cause of death directly from NYT headline as clarified by original examiner Persechino. Asthma very important part of understanding cause of death as 7 to 15 secs of choking doesn't normally cause death and didn't even knock Garner unconscious. 7 second chokehold is wrong because NYPD chokehold definition doesn't require 2 arms just restriction of airway, but we can say 7 to 15 secs if you want. Nobody knows exactly for sure not even Pantaleo. Tag: Undo

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  • 07:3507:35, 10 June 2019 diff hist −9 Killing of Eric GarnerUndid good faith edit by OKchaser2112. Again removing "alleged" from lower in the article for same reason as last edit Tag: Undo
  • 07:3207:32, 10 June 2019 diff hist −10 Killing of Eric GarnerUndid good faith edit by OKchaser2112. Choking may be alleged, but headlock cannot be denied and Pantaleo has not denied holding garner by the neck. It may have started as a "seatbelt" maneuver, but it obviously transitioned to more than that. To question the obvious is bad for Wikipedia credibility. Tag: Undo

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  • 22:2722:27, 29 May 2019 diff hist −123 SiphonUndid good faith edit by Ashiqxxmohd. It is not clear what it means that later workers had a "higher authority". And it's not explained how the siphon changed. Tag: Undo

26 May 2019

  • 15:0415:04, 26 May 2019 diff hist −9 Killing of Eric GarnerUndid good faith edit. Vascular restraint squeezes off blood flow to make person unconscious. Garner was still conscious and talking after Pantaleo's arm was removed. You'll need a cite to claim vascular restraint. Tag: Undo

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  • 04:0804:08, 14 April 2019 diff hist +39 SiphonPrevious edit by Nardog has advantage of complying with WP:ISAWORDFOR but implies all devices that involve the flow of liquids through a tube can be considered siphons. I can't think of good alternative. I think better to violate WP:ISAWORDFOR than to give that implication.

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  • 03:2403:24, 27 August 2018 diff hist 0 Lisinoprilchanged "peak action" to "peak effect" as in the cited book. They're probably synonymous but I'm using the exact same word so there can be no question.
  • 03:2003:20, 27 August 2018 diff hist −19 LisinoprilChanged 48 hrs peak action to the more plausible 4-8 hours as appears on page 115 of the cited book - Cardiac Drug Therapy by Kahn in google books. Given 12hr half life, 48 hrs peak action was perhaps possible, but seems unlikely.

17 July 2018

  • 10:2010:20, 17 July 2018 diff hist −47 Killing of Eric GarnerUndid revision 850416532 by StjJackson (talk) Since his daughter died its become clear he died of a heart attack brought on by asthma attack when resisting arrest, not a 15.3sec neck hold still talking after it. Coroner finding is obsolete. Not even a grand jury indictment not even for wrecklessness let alone proof of murder. Tag: Undo

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