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A user with 15 edits. Account created on 27 July 2023.
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5 May 2024

4 May 2024

9 August 2023

7 August 2023

  • 08:0508:05, 7 August 2023 diff hist −39 m Economic globalizationI've chronologically restructured the "Technology" subsection of the Evolution of Globalization. WWI disruptions (citation added), 1956's containerized shipping invention, and the 1970s revival. The addition of "Digital Globalization" highlights the current global proliferation of digital flows. Tag: Visual edit

1 August 2023

30 July 2023

29 July 2023

  • 13:4813:48, 29 July 2023 diff hist +258 m DrSmileI made some enhancements to the "Treatment" and "Criticism" sections by eliminating any promotional content and ensuring that the writing is from a neutral perspective. Additionally, I updated the name "DrSmile" to "DR SMILE" to match the article's format. Furthermore, I modified the section title "Criticism" to "Controversy". Tags: nowiki added Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
  • 12:0012:00, 29 July 2023 diff hist −11 m Certificate of depositHere are the changes I made: Added a hyphen in "longer-term" and "fixed-interest" for consistency. Replaced "Criticism" with "Limitations" as it seems more appropriate to describe the limitations of CDs rather than criticism. Added a comma after "On the other hand", "Even to the extent" and "This is particularly important" for proper punctuation. Changed "in common with other fixed-interest investments" to "similar to other fixed-interest investments" for better phrasing. Added a comma after " Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
  • 10:5710:57, 29 July 2023 diff hist +106 m Prometric→‎References: I edited the article, removing promotional language and adding neutral information. I updated the infobox and followed Wikipedia's formatting guidelines for the reference list. Tag: Visual edit
  • 00:0000:00, 29 July 2023 diff hist +323 m Thomas H. Lee PartnersThe article's tone has been modified to be impartial and factual, taking into consideration the issues of notability and promotional language. Additionally, the heading 'Art Van' has been changed to 'Art Van Bankruptcy'. As a result, the updated version of the article now conforms to Wikipedia's standards and guidelines. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit