User contributions for Martindo

30 December 2023

• 21:0621:06, 30 December 2023 diff hist −114 Aleutian Islands →Prehistory: cut opinionated (flattering) adverbs, which made the "by whom?" tag no longer necessary

25 December 2023

• 07:1807:18, 25 December 2023 diff hist +1,348 Talk:Jewish-American patronage of Chinese restaurants →Notability issue: recommend for deletion: recommend for deletion, abandon sophistry such as Tuchman and Levine article cited often here Tag: New topic
• 07:0607:06, 25 December 2023 diff hist −146 Jewish-American patronage of Chinese restaurants →Historical background: cut specious stat that has no validating reference in the cited source (which is incredibly anecdotal, pseudo-academic)

22 December 2023

• 05:0105:01, 22 December 2023 diff hist −381 Michelle Obama →Education and early career: he wasn't an alumnus but still a student when she was admitted, also cut reference to his later career which is tangential to the point being made about legacy preference

21 December 2023

• 21:0621:06, 21 December 2023 diff hist +1,200 Talk:Oscar Ichazo →Splitting proposal: clarification Tag: Reply
• 08:3908:39, 21 December 2023 diff hist +397 Talk:Oscar Ichazo →Splitting proposal: reply to an unhelpful reply Tag: Reply
• 08:3608:36, 21 December 2023 diff hist +3 Prambanan →Rediscovery: corrected erroneous semi-colon and modified "the kings" to refer more accurately to two of the several sultanates in Java at that time
• 08:3308:33, 21 December 2023 diff hist +6 Prambanan →Abandonment: modified speculation to conform to Mt. Merapi page

14 December 2023

• 05:4105:41, 14 December 2023 diff hist +238 Talk:Jakarta →Java Is Not The Most Populous Island: consider deleting this section of Talk Tag: Reply
• 05:3505:35, 14 December 2023 diff hist +85 2023 United Nations Climate Change Conference partial revert because their rebuttal does have some logic to it, which should not be excised
• 05:1705:17, 14 December 2023 diff hist +49 2023 United Nations Climate Change Conference →Public health considerations: there is no unified "the" medical community -- replaced exaggeration in cited source subtitle with direct quote about actual support
• 00:3300:33, 14 December 2023 diff hist +2,004 Talk:Oscar Ichazo →Splitting proposal: exploration of why there's a split and how it relates to ignoring experiential accounts Tag: Reply
• 00:0200:02, 14 December 2023 diff hist −63 El Niño →Asia: cut extraneous info about high temp in paragraph about rainfall in Singapore (which averages 31-32 C in Feb)

7 December 2023

• 04:3304:33, 7 December 2023 diff hist +77 2023 eruption of Mount Marapi →Eruption: added details from cited source, removed "covered" which implies heavy coverage but photos show only thin ash layer, it would be ideal if someone can find official depth of ash
• 04:2304:23, 7 December 2023 diff hist −17 2023 eruption of Mount Marapi →Background: smoother syntax
• 02:1302:13, 7 December 2023 diff hist +5 Jakarta made start of paragraph consistent with the rest of the paragaph about SINKING. Please do not impose knee-jerk global warming OR that contradicts the evidence in this case.

1 December 2023

• 05:2905:29, 1 December 2023 diff hist +735 Wikipedia talk:Arbitration Committee Elections December 2023/Candidates/Maxim →10 candidates for 8 slots: rethinking/limiting role of ArbCom in order to broaden election choices and reduce workload Tags: Disambiguation links added New topic
• 03:0003:00, 1 December 2023 diff hist −1,828 User talk:Martindo →I think a dumb bot blocked the IP address that I have used for years
• 03:0003:00, 1 December 2023 diff hist −1,252 User talk:Martindo →HIV dissent
• 02:5902:59, 1 December 2023 diff hist −382 User talk:Martindo →Ichazo & Arica
• 02:5302:53, 1 December 2023 diff hist +836 Wikipedia:Arbitration Committee Elections December 2023/Candidates/ToBeFree/Questions →Individual questions: multiple roles in WP
• 02:3502:35, 1 December 2023 diff hist +100 User talk:Martindo →ACE Question: Reply Tag: Reply
• 02:3402:34, 1 December 2023 diff hist +439 Wikipedia:Arbitration Committee Elections December 2023/Candidates/Cabayi/Statement →Cabayi: asking for clarification Tag: Reverted
• 00:3400:34, 1 December 2023 diff hist +757 Wikipedia:Arbitration Committee Elections December 2023/Candidates/Maxim/Questions →Individual questions: one plus

30 November 2023

• 21:1121:11, 30 November 2023 diff hist −6,811 User talk:Martindo →Your Don R. Edits - claiming two memoirs are self published etc.
• 21:1021:10, 30 November 2023 diff hist −21 m Russell Norman →Career: cut redundant phrase

23 November 2023

• 07:0107:01, 23 November 2023 diff hist +386 User talk:Martindo →Your Don R. Edits - claiming two memoirs are self published etc.: Reply Tag: Reply
• 06:5806:58, 23 November 2023 diff hist −101 Billy Rose →Life and work: Reworded generalization: Carole King, Leonard Cohen, and many others "after Rose" started as writers before recording as performers. Is the trend explained in this paragraph actually in the cited source, though?

22 November 2023

• 07:2107:21, 22 November 2023 diff hist +1,220 User talk:Martindo →Your Don R. Edits - claiming two memoirs are self published etc.: OK, a few notes to end my explanation Tag: Reply
• 07:1107:11, 22 November 2023 diff hist +43 Geisel School of Medicine →Notable alumni: "freethinker" is too vague -- his page, and the Encycl Brit cited source, both mention his legal problems related to birth control
• 01:1801:18, 22 November 2023 diff hist +691 User talk:Martindo →Your Don R. Edits - claiming two memoirs are self published etc.: You seem to feel strongly, so just open a topic on Talk or edit the page as you see fit Tag: Reply
• 01:1401:14, 22 November 2023 diff hist −9 1929 Hebron massacre →Simmering tensions: split long paragraph into 3, separating overview at the end; reworded awkward "impression"
• 01:0901:09, 22 November 2023 diff hist −1 1929 Hebron massacre →Simmering tensions: smoothed awkward syntax that had bizarre capitalization in the middle of a sentence
• 01:0601:06, 22 November 2023 diff hist 0 m 1929 Hebron massacre →Simmering tensions: split overly long paragraph to remove ambiguity of using "communities" to refer to different groups

19 November 2023

• 08:1708:17, 19 November 2023 diff hist +936 User talk:Martindo →Your Don R. Edits - claiming two memoirs are self published etc.: reasoning elaborated slightly here Tag: Reply

17 November 2023

• 08:5808:58, 17 November 2023 diff hist −978 Donald Rumsfeld →Secretary of Defense (1975–1977): cut paragraph based on biographical sources (i.e., essentially self-published recollections), East Timor refers to Fretilin as center-left and says Guterres was a member while President in 2017 -- this makes "communist insurgency" in the deleted paragraph sound like a nervous POV rather than a political fact

16 November 2023

• 21:0921:09, 16 November 2023 diff hist −11 m Danielle Allen →Education and academic career: cut extraneous info, length adds nothing to her summa cum laude
• 08:4608:46, 16 November 2023 diff hist +220 Israel–Hamas war →17 October Israeli Airstrikes: update from CNN, which discusses multiple videos previously relied on

14 November 2023

• 21:2421:24, 14 November 2023 diff hist +812 User talk:Dna-webmaster →The Holocaust in occupied Poland: two suggestions for the caption Tag: New topic
• 07:2607:26, 14 November 2023 diff hist −1 Firearms of Japan →Sengoku Period: split sentence that contradicted itself -- weak penetration is clear at *maximum* distance
• 06:5706:57, 14 November 2023 diff hist +27 Dixie →Region: he didn't "recognize" -- cited source says he "griped"

11 November 2023

• 09:3209:32, 11 November 2023 diff hist +840 Talk:Criticism of Tesla, Inc. →Take a step back from grinding the ax and look at the workshop as a whole: Still way too many details, needs more update and less POV Tag: Reply
• 09:1809:18, 11 November 2023 diff hist −654 Criticism of Tesla, Inc. →SolarCity buyout: updated by cutting references voicing an opinion on original lawsuit and an expectataion of decision -- a settlement was reached Tag: Reverted
• 09:0709:07, 11 November 2023 diff hist −1,626 m Criticism of Tesla, Inc. →SolarCity buyout: cut more overkill, tangentially relevant to buyout. The judge dismissed "with prejudice" meaning that the issue cannot be raised again. Tag: Reverted
• 09:0609:06, 11 November 2023 diff hist −674 Criticism of Tesla, Inc. Undid revision 1184569055 by QRep2020 (talk)Publicizing leaked files is overkill regarding details of an investigation that did not lead to charges. Clear POV and possible legal issues, so I cut it. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 08:5708:57, 11 November 2023 diff hist −534 m Lacy (song) →Composition: cut reference to "reception" misplaced in Composition section, also seems like Undue Weight regarding number of sources presented for this hypothesis that runs against writer's own motivation

6 November 2023

• 05:2405:24, 6 November 2023 diff hist +13 m Frank Howard (baseball) →Los Angeles Dodgers: clarified timeline of back-and-forth
• 05:2105:21, 6 November 2023 diff hist +1 Frank Howard (baseball) grammar: correct construction is either "between A and B" or "from A to b"
• 02:4802:48, 6 November 2023 diff hist +10 The Morning of the Magicians preposition tweak, plus toned down the generalization about being precursor for "all" New Age ides
• 02:4602:46, 6 November 2023 diff hist +101 The Morning of the Magicians smoothed sequence in first paragraph of lede, including balancing the POV that had selectively quoted from the same cited reviewer